Spike and Fluttershy accidentally end up on a pirate ship and embark a high-seas adventure to the mysterious Blacklands! Join Spike as he and his friends discover uncharted lands and go on a quest to destroy an ancient dark power before it awakens!
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A quick note about guns: the heavier they are the less they recoil. I can understand the gun is just so powerful that even though it's heavy it still kicks like a mule, but the heavier the gun the less the recoil, overall. Would be interesting if he described it as "large, but surprisingly light" which of course means when it kicks it goes everywhere.
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Thanks, I'll get right on that. You know, I'm surprised you still read my story. I'm glad you've been sticking around.
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Well... the sensible way to make a high caliber but small gun is to make it as heavy as possible. Requires less muscle power to keep under control.
And yeah, I never really left... The story was doing things too quickly, but now that you're spending time building out the characters that were mostly introduced abruptly it is getting better.
'Sup? Good chapter, now I want to see Edgar opening all the
gatesbands, I want to see his full power.ChillOut
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That'll be scary....