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Doctor Whooves

The Doctor arrives in Ponyville where he meets 2 mares: Derpy and Carrot Top. They follow him around as he explores and they even help him defeat Daleks that invade Ponyville and threaten lives.

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luckymunchies123

luckymunchies123 #1 · Dec 31st, 2014 · · ·

Your grammar is not that great, but I guess the plot could be better. What really annoys me is your use of whitespace. Indenting every single line except for the first in the paragraph is the opposite of what people normally do. Although your story had a few issues, I enjoyed how terrible it was!

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