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What a wonderful existence

Animal care is a rewarding job, but doesn't always have a heartwarming ending

Had this idea in my head for a bit, it's my very first story so please bare with me, rated teen because I'm not sure if the subject matter is right for everyone

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Zilverfoss #1 · Jan 6th, 2015 · · · What a wonderful existence ·

If you haven't got a pre-reader for this, I suggest you find one.
Normally, names begin with a capital Letter.
And there's a couple of other odd balls. Mostly odd or missing words and a slight lack of punctuation in some places.