I should not have to think of my husband's funeral in terms of logistics. But thanks to Aunt Celestia I now did, and I hated her for that.
This is one of the most poignant paragraphs I've read in a while. Well done.
Certainly some fascinating stuff here, from an explanation for Cadance's bizarre youth to hints of some vast, multigenerational plan involving a certain line of unicorns. I look forward to more.
Then, once the adrenaline had worn off and I'd chased away the fears that my beautiful little Twily had been hurt, I'd joined in the celebration for her incredible achievement. The glow of happiness on her face was so wonderful it even made up for the fact that it wasn't me who'd been responsible for it.
I'm confused by this part, is Cadance unhappy that she wasn't the one to make Twilight that happy or because she hadn't planned for that to happen?
By the way, Warding Glow is an excellent pony name, a congruent concept or idea, like Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Rarity, intangible but descriptive, and not a literal object analogy like Shining Armor or a meaningless mashup of words.
Those are surprisingly rare in the fandom, heck, now even the show can seem to come up with them anymore, they just keep recycling twilight sparkle (admittedly hard to top).
This is one of the most poignant paragraphs I've read in a while. Well done.
Certainly some fascinating stuff here, from an explanation for Cadance's bizarre youth to hints of some vast, multigenerational plan involving a certain line of unicorns. I look forward to more.
This definitely looks interesting. The writing is very good too
Intriguing premise, will keep an eye on it.
I'm confused by this part, is Cadance unhappy that she wasn't the one to make Twilight that happy or because she hadn't planned for that to happen?
Looks interesting. Definitely putting this on my tracking list.
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Thanks guys, and do stick around: I think this story is going to blow minds.
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Mostly the first.
By the way, Warding Glow is an excellent pony name, a congruent concept or idea, like Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Rarity, intangible but descriptive, and not a literal object analogy like Shining Armor or a meaningless mashup of words.
Those are surprisingly rare in the fandom, heck, now even the show can seem to come up with them anymore, they just keep recycling twilight sparkle (admittedly hard to top).
Intriguing. I'll track for now.
Faved, simply because I want to know what the Hell is going on here...
Will this end with Princest? Or TwiDance?