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You use 'an' when the word standing after it starts with A, E, I, O, U.
You use 'a' when it is not. (That aside, I'm sure you know how to use a/an)
Beside that, there are quite a few mispells and grammatical errors.
Sorry, but, I'm not in the mood to scour the chapter for those typos.
I suppose I will wait for the editor.
Here is some music hat might fit with certain parts of this chapter...No, the meaning of the lyric isn't exactly related.
6196288 damn it I thought I caught the errors this time why there's always errors I miss when I do last looks! But thanks for bring them to my attention Amethyst but have I improved in the writing this time round?
6196337 No, not really...Actually, yeah. I can actually make out what you meant. Still, those mistakes are glaring
English is not your mother tongue, yes?
6196359 English is my first language.....it just I have problems in the form of speech impediments, spelling and grammar had always my weakness points which is funny I can read almost any novel once I can recall any moment, characters and sometimes the very lines themselves for months even years in sometimes cases after just reading it once but I cant seem to catch errors in my own work
6196405 That's unfortunate. Well, try to keep it simple then. I can't help you with your situation. I'm not psychologist or doctor...
Another musical piece that would probably fit. Why I keep posting these? Why not?
6196421 I'm all for music so I don't mind you posting all these songs.......speaking about music have you seen my latest work Metal Domination? Nobody is giving a reason why for all the hate minus one guy but still I should get a reason why I mean 22 likes 23 dislikes it seems that the readers can't decide if it's a good fic or not plus the it has one of the best openings I ever wrote..
6196453 Oh...The story seem like it is interesting...One thing though.
Grammatical errors and mispellings (Though, not a lot)...Then there are the misused they're, their, there, it, it's, its...
6196489 Misused words? well that's a new one....- sigh- at least the grammar and spelling wasn't too bad. I'm doing something completely new with MD but it doesn't look good so far
Maybe instead of get your rocks off in front of females, you should be training more!
6203894 besides a few laughs she's not there for much
6203919 your translation is correct
I love this. Keep up the good work.
6248197 thanks, what was your favorite part of the story
I don't have so much a favourite part as I love the sense of grand scale adventure I'm getting from the back story and all these pieces falling into place.
6248316 ah but all the pieces had yet to arrive on the broad
6277064 Can sombody explain me how they are able to draw this kind of things?
6278500 I don't know how they draw em neither Lufer
6278507 silly Despair, Its obviously magic.
I'm ashamed of these people... They don't even comment on the March of Cambreadth being in there?! That song is perfect!
6303082 Aye my friend it seem nobody know the song.
6303672 I don't know though. Perhaps Battle Dawn would be a good theme for the Human God Grimmnjor.
6306042 maybe
Sucks major ballage.
6330807 what now?
6330807
You what mate?
This give me the total war feling.
The original song.
March of Cambreadth ยท Heather Alexander