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7673475 they are out now
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Holy fuck, so many words
7673507 I know
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7476007 the chapter is out
hmm I though that there would be more comments then this.. how am I suppose to know well received the chapter was if I don't get feedback?
7674453 Takes forever to read all this ya know, I still need to read the second part still, other than that some errors here and there and looking forward to see how this all plays out.
7674523 Ah finally somebody say something, the chapter was been up for several hours, I do understand that it takes I while to read the whole thing but I had seen the read counters on halves with numbers on them over the aforementioned several hours.... I want to know well the chapter plays out and plus I do planing making an video to reply to questions the readers have which I can't do without the needed feedback.
Then there is the plot challenge.....
7674453 I haven't read the (continued) part yet, I'll condense my thoughts on the chapter and comment once I have.
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First half: It was a good chapter, but I don't really have much to say about it other than I was hoping Dust would pull something like the following on Celestia:
Celestia=Vegeta
Dust=Cell
Second half:
And now I'm afraid Applejack's gonna pull a Boromir to Alkyore's Aragorn.
*Rage-induced heavy breathing*
Traitor!
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Why am I expecting him to end up like Megatron in 'Transformers: Dark of the Moon'?
How we see Big Mac:
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How most of the politicians in that room see Big Mac:
So not only is he the son of one of the most powerful demons to ever live, he's also the son of one of the most powerful angels in the multiverse? Which also makes him Harmony's grandchild?
...Sleipnir, you dun fucked up now.
7676242 So I take it that you prefer the second half of the chapter than the first one
7676262 Not really, I just remember it a bit more clearly since I just got done reading it, while I read the first half yesterday.
7676276 hmm so what you liked about the chapter then?
7676280 Uhhhhh... muffin?
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7686829 ah yes the dreaded fourth wall scene... it's purpose was to be funny, one last bit of light warmheartedness before we go to the darker parts of the story which I have left warnings for at the top ... would you believe that this is the third version of it? if you though that was bad then you should see the original version and yes I had consider in removing it, I just don't know what to replace it with.
7686903 Maybe just remove it altogether and combine the remainder of this chapter with the previous? As it stood, this chapter felt a bit like a vignette as opposed to a full on chapter, so deleting that fourth wall break and combining the rest with the previous chapter might make it flow smoother.
7689278 hmm maybe
7697641 ?
7697617 what is the score?
nice chapter as always
and don't worry, i think we all are a little insane
What the absolute buck just happened...
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This story has been out for ages an I know but I must ask....what ze actual fuck was this chapter..?
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I am scared to say it but I think it is Lord Despair's sexual tension unleashed...
8421374 No.... it's worse
Rage...it's growing. But at least there are some good in this chapter, small but powerful.
I so can't wait for the chapter were the so called King gets his ass handed to him by our dark mage