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Pieces of Eight

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The tale of eight Bat Ponies all searching for a place to call home and a family to make their own.

(This story centres around these: Bat Ponies, though they are younger in this story compared to the picture.)

Chapters (5)

The Guiding Star and his Shield · 1st Dec 2014 · 1,131 words
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A Mistaken Vampire · 1st Dec 2014 · 1,537 words
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The Ocean's Voice · 1st Dec 2014 · 3,688 words
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The Littlest Cook · 1st Dec 2014 · 3,457 words
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An Angel in Demon's Wings · 6th Jan 2015 · 4,045 words
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DarkZonker

DarkZonker #1 · Dec 2nd, 2014 · · · The Ocean's Voice ·

I've got to say, the story is interesting and I really like the main characters, but there are some problems too. The story feels really rushed a lot of the time and most of the side characters don't have a lot of life to them, go ahead and take your time with the story. Also, in the last chapter, the explanation of a bola really isn't needed. If people don't know what it is, they can look it up, or better yet, explain it in the story so they don't have too. Other than that, the grammar is terrific and I love the music... powers that Calypso has.

Amdragg