"Nice try!" Rainbow Dash backed out of the room altogether as the *doorframe above her rattled and **disentegrated. "Give it up! It's not happening! Nothing you want is happening!" She stomped her hooves. "Nothing!"
This world, this narrative. Reject it all both bitter and sweet, for within this darkness you do not belong. May this tragedy fall only to absence. May nothingness claim you before darkness.
"It's gotta be Discord... or m-maybe King Sombra's dark shadowy stuff..."
Except Discord would be semi-reformed by this point in the story, and if RD THOUGHT about it, she'd realize desperate times call for desperate measures.
They can't hold a candle to Harmony. Nothing can." She shuddered. "Nothing..."
Beware saying nothing.
Be silent.
This insane writer sucks. Seriously. That isn't even TRYING to be invisible anymore!
asinine puissant whore?!"
Wrong use of word.
Just go through the world mirror Lyra if you like humans so much.
If this is every fanfic ever, where is Rarity being hit in the face with a cream pie?
Huh, never mind, this chapter Rainbow Dash is struck with definitely cannibalistic urges. 5360916 At some point after you make the meta revelation the whole story shifts to comedy. "Dark fics are the problem" says the person writing an incredibly dark, gory fic.
Next the author will teach us the dangers of arson by burning down several stores, while laughing maniacally. "See this, see how much fun I'm having, it's horrible" will be distinguishable between mad cackles "All fire is bad, look at how it's burning these stores. No fire ever accomplished anything good."
As expected, Rainbow Dash hangs on the last vestiges of her integrity. She has seen what horrors we are capable of bringing upon her-- she will break. If the lack of subtlety and grotesque, surreal horror are not enough, then despair will finish her.
Like it or not, we win in the end. This is what we wanted.
The narration isn't even trying to be subtle anymore! Something has to give. Either Rainbow Dash manages to get out, or... Fuck, I don't even want to imagine the alternative...
This. Is seriously creepy. I'm loving it!
5351545 dude this i shit is making me go insane
Holy butts.
* Should be two words
** Should be 'disintegrated'
The comparison using a wardrobe full of trench coats gave me chills.
You can do this, Rainbow Dash!
You can do this...
I am rather unnerved at the moment. Well done.
This world,
this narrative.
Reject it all both bitter and sweet,
for within this darkness you do not belong.
May this tragedy fall only to absence.
May nothingness claim you before darkness.
We shall read on.
Just FYI, "puissant" actually means "powerful". That's probably not what you thought it meant when you sandwiched it between "asinine" and "whore".
"It's gotta be Discord... or m-maybe King Sombra's dark shadowy stuff..."
Except Discord would be semi-reformed by this point in the story, and if RD THOUGHT about it, she'd realize desperate times call for desperate measures.
They can't hold a candle to Harmony. Nothing can." She shuddered. "Nothing..."
Beware saying nothing.
Be silent.
This insane writer sucks. Seriously. That isn't even TRYING to be invisible anymore!
asinine puissant whore?!"
Wrong use of word.
Just go through the world mirror Lyra if you like humans so much.
If this is every fanfic ever, where is Rarity being hit in the face with a cream pie?
Holy shit I love this stuff! What sort of weird horror genre is this?
Huh, never mind, this chapter Rainbow Dash is struck with definitely cannibalistic urges.
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At some point after you make the meta revelation the whole story shifts to comedy. "Dark fics are the problem" says the person writing an incredibly dark, gory fic.
Next the author will teach us the dangers of arson by burning down several stores, while laughing maniacally. "See this, see how much fun I'm having, it's horrible" will be distinguishable between mad cackles "All fire is bad, look at how it's burning these stores. No fire ever accomplished anything good."
As expected, Rainbow Dash hangs on the last vestiges of her integrity. She has seen what horrors we are capable of bringing upon her-- she will break. If the lack of subtlety and grotesque, surreal horror are not enough, then despair will finish her.
Like it or not, we win in the end. This is what we wanted.
My heart is beating so fast right now.... UGH the suspense!!!
The narration isn't even trying to be subtle anymore!
Something has to give. Either Rainbow Dash manages to get out, or...
Fuck, I don't even want to imagine the alternative...
There isn't just one entity trying to manipulate Dash. It's multiple, sometimes doing it simultaneously.
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I'm done. I'm just done.
"This insane writer sucks. Seriously. That isn't even TRYING to be invisible anymore!"
Can you do better, faggot?
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"If this is every fanfic ever, where is Rarity being hit in the face with a cream pie?"
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