While there is a lot of creepy here, a lot of it is informed creepy.
And there's nothing wrong with the Doctor being about . . . it would be IN CHARACTER for him to stay out of Pony's way, and simply deal with troubles that are his area of expertise. And HIS CARD DESCRIPTION from Hasbro pretty much spelled out that, yeah, this pony is that alien time traveler. And besides, it ALSO gives Rainbow Dash a way out . . . if anyone would know how to break a narrative time loop, it's him. Also, WHY does the story loop? I knew that was the twist at the end after read the first two sentences of the first chapter! Why would the almighty author make a fic as an endless loop? Everything else in the hell of watching Ponyville act more and more out of character is one thing, but the endless loop doesn't make sense. Unless it's a take that to the MLP Loops series itself.
I cannot believe I missed the MLD references. I was too busy looking for horror ones that those Daddy letters actually skimmed the top of my head. Then suddenly came a disconcerting nonrhyming Zecora that disracted me from thinking any more of the Daddy letters.
I don't get what the Zecora reference. Guess I haven't read where that's from. Either that or SS&E made it up. Unrhymy Zecora is such a red flag.
I really can't believe I had a brain fart and missed out on the blatant MLD references XD
"There ya go, Rainbow Dash!" Derpy Hooves grinned, eyes rotating in opposite directions. She dropped Rainbow down before her front door. "You looked like you were in so much pain there, I had to lend a hoof!"
I HAVE LITERALLY NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON ANYMORE.
I LOVE IT.
Zecora not rhyming is the scariest thing so far.
Would the "Daddy" be a reference to "My Little Dashie?" But then why would it be so creepy.
What is Rainbow's home's scene referencing? Some sort of RD domestic abuse fic??
Zecora wasn't rhyming....
5352171 wrote : "Would the "Daddy" be a reference to "My Little Dashie?" But then why would it be so creepy."
No, I think it references some fic where her dad tortures her some.
5354307 wrote : "Zecora wasn't rhyming...."
That wasn't Zecora.
Still don't know what fic it's referencing.
Maybe a changeling Zecora one perhaps now.
Doctor? What Doctor?
Hahaha.
this got a physical reaction out of me other than laughter. awsome
Nothing is the same.
Can you defy this fate,
lurking in the blackness so all-consuming,
fleeting like the thoughts of familiarity?
We shall read on.
Zecora not speaking in verse? That is OOC.
While there is a lot of creepy here, a lot of it is informed creepy.
And there's nothing wrong with the Doctor being about . . . it would be IN CHARACTER for him to stay out of Pony's way, and simply deal with troubles that are his area of expertise. And HIS CARD DESCRIPTION from Hasbro pretty much spelled out that, yeah, this pony is that alien time traveler. And besides, it ALSO gives Rainbow Dash a way out . . . if anyone would know how to break a narrative time loop, it's him. Also, WHY does the story loop? I knew that was the twist at the end after read the first two sentences of the first chapter! Why would the almighty author make a fic as an endless loop? Everything else in the hell of watching Ponyville act more and more out of character is one thing, but the endless loop doesn't make sense. Unless it's a take that to the MLP Loops series itself.
So much implied creepiness... So many implied traps... So many implied references! Pure awesomeness.
What The Fuck Man?!
What The Fuck?!
I cannot believe I missed the MLD references. I was too busy looking for horror ones that those Daddy letters actually skimmed the top of my head. Then suddenly came a disconcerting nonrhyming Zecora that disracted me from thinking any more of the Daddy letters.
I don't get what the Zecora reference. Guess I haven't read where that's from. Either that or SS&E made it up. Unrhymy Zecora is such a red flag.
I really can't believe I had a brain fart and missed out on the blatant MLD references XD
BOXES FOR THE BOX GOD!!!
DERPY!!!!!!! HECK YES!!!!!!!