It is really freaking me the fuck out that the narration is becoming more and more blatantly manipulative as the story goes on. The writers are the villains in this story, rewriting everything to be more in line with the darker concepts of the fandom. The fact that RD vocally denies the narration itself at one point just makes it all the worse.
Rainbow's left wing has been injured since the start of the story... I'm beginning to think she might've been slightly more aware of what was going on before the first chapter and purposely injured herself so the pain could serve as a distraction and as a reminder for whatever memories are unchanged for her as she trudges on. Like, the pain from the wing seems to beat out the ringing at times. In this chapter, AJ's hug presses into RD's wing and it could be interpreted that pain keeps RD from completely falling to lust. Or that her mind wasn't falling for it already, but she had to get away cuz those hugs sure were painful?
This is actually starting to really scare me now. That means you did a good job!
L-lewd...!
This is sounding as if the world is falling under the control of the fanon of the majority of the fanbase... Which would be interesting as hell.
I guess us fanfic writers are the evil ones, eh? Is it so wrong for us to make cute little ponies fuck and murder each other?
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I coulda phrased that better.
Rainbow Dash, you must resist! A fate crueler than all others awaits you should you fail!
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My friends and I at work play a game called "Phrasing".
Any time someone says something that could be taken as 'risque', you can say 'Phrasing?' in response.
You'll find that the most innocuous sentences can be...well, perverted.
In two separate windows, a green face and a yellow face pressed up to the glass, staring straight at the pegasus from afar.
Creepiest sh*t ever
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You're not the only one... o.o
SOMEONE HUG ME
Shipping. The problem is how RANDOM it seems at times in the fandom.
They're all falling under the control of the fanfic writers! Such an awesome concept!!
I never thought a story would actually manage to scare me beyond the level of "general creepiness," but this has done it.
It is really freaking me the fuck out that the narration is becoming more and more blatantly manipulative as the story goes on.
The writers are the villains in this story, rewriting everything to be more in line with the darker concepts of the fandom.
The fact that RD vocally denies the narration itself at one point just makes it all the worse.
that blog post of yours sure does explain a lot.
Rainbow's left wing has been injured since the start of the story... I'm beginning to think she might've been slightly more aware of what was going on before the first chapter and purposely injured herself so the pain could serve as a distraction and as a reminder for whatever memories are unchanged for her as she trudges on. Like, the pain from the wing seems to beat out the ringing at times. In this chapter, AJ's hug presses into RD's wing and it could be interpreted that pain keeps RD from completely falling to lust. Or that her mind wasn't falling for it already, but she had to get away cuz those hugs sure were painful?
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Yeah, shipping can be random at times. All the more reason to put it in this story, show how wrong it can be.