5202160 Well, there is one more hole that hasn't been used... and Rainbow could start entering the rebellious daring teenager age... cogs are spinning ;)
5202238 thats why i keep my morals in real life and not let them control what i read or find good..if i did then id have a lot less to read...MAH STORIES ARE ON!
5201877 That's what happened with me as well. I don't typically read foalcon. I've read maybe three since I found this site, and if this is the third and not the second, then the first probably disgusted me to the point where I blocked it from my memory. I could never write it myself, either. I've written clop and smut before (and am continuing now), but I'm a little ashamed even of the 17-year-old chararacters used in the one I'm working on currently, and were it to get out that I wrote sex stories featuring underage cartoon horses, it'd probably take weeks for me to start acting normal again.
5203054 She sorta already had that happen with the first chapter ;) Cumflation is hot.
5203052 I didn't come up with that. I saw it somewhere else. Can't remember where though.
5203040 5203014 AND THE REST OF THE SEQUEL-WANTING PEOPLE I wouldn't really be against a sequel (sequel, not additional chapter). An older Rainbow, one who takes more charge and actually knows whats happening. It seems like lots of people want it. I enjoyed writing this one, and would enjoy writing another. It'd have slightly different elements (Dom Rainbow for one), but how does that sound? Upvote this comment if you want a sequel.
5198334 What I am saying is that I couldn't move right then since I had a massive boner and it would be awkward as fuck to walk around like that. I have a laptop so the computer wasn't hindering my movement.
This was amazing. You made it feel like more of a learning experience, and showed some care for the situation. I honestly came for the story, the why of it, and I was not dissappointed.
“Pip looked out from under the cover of-” ... “The Return of the King?” she asked confusedly.
I was thinking Littlepip. That's not a trilogy though.
She smiled, scooting closer to her dad and putting on her best cute face. She knew it would wither away almost any competition,
How do young ponies do that?
“I don't really think this is the best idea.”
This is a pretty good idea actually.
Now you spread your hind legs as much as you can and let me do the rest.”
Please continue.
“Can I, um, squeeze your hoof?”
Aww. That's cute. You don't see that too often in Foalcon.
“M'kay Dad, I'm ready.”
Drugs are bad.
like it belonged there forever.
You don't know how much that line pleases me in a nonsexual way(and sexually too). Please keep using it.
Foals were absolutely remarkable.
Is he going to play this game with other foals? Please say No.
Every so often he'd hit her clitoris
You know that's on the outside right?
Part of him wanted to just dig his muzzle in and slurp it all up, but he knew his daughter would probably protest. Maybe.
Save that for later.
Regardless, he licked his lips and took up a position he hadn't been in in quite a while.
How long has he been without a wife/girlfriend?
“Probably the only thing girly about her,”
Because her body is not girly at all? Curves? Voice?
Rainbolt is best dad.
True. If he had a son though, he would have turned out an even better father. Is there going to be another chapter? I doubt it. Can you PM a copy of the pic Sir Author?
5200267 the strangeness of the world i live in is entertaining and stressfful of course having a pretty blue alicorn princess by my side and asking questions about pron is both of those, like the topic of humanxpony Luna:... I do not see how him grabbing her tail is enjoyable as some wankah put it, "Different strokes fr' diffrent blokes" Luna: and this... Cold-blooded-Twilight artist... (OH DEAR STARS NO!) Luna: I quite like their art... what are thes pictures about Ms. way about? Milky Way? Iono, something about crotch boobs and milk i think Luna:and Atryl? ... some things are best not knowing my little princess Luna: And vorarephilia- NOPE! not explaining that to ya! Luna: fair enough... hoof and foot fetishes? your guess is as good as mine on that
like i said, I leave sexuality to her, I just like ponies and duel monsters Luna: Miiiiiiiiidniiiiiiiiiiight~ Lyra is high again! I know, I just tied her to the bed, I set up the couch for us Luna: trots over, resting her head in my lap* writing to a hater? nope, someone who finds you and lyra driving me bonkers funny Luna: Oh... pet me~ *puss-in-boots eyes* ... dammit blue horse
Why can't we see current or so (as in adult) Rainbow approach her dad, remind him about what happened, discuss the morals and then probably bang again. :D
5199638 Okay :)
5201595 It's okay. I've had quite a few people say they hate foalcon, but like this.
oh oh my this this was absolutely amazing brohoof
Any more cummmimg? See what I did there
Well, I know what I'm fapping to tonight.
personally I have nothing against consensual foalcon, and this certainly falls into that category...
This has very quickly become a very good story line, I must have more Raincest!
God...dammit Nappa...
There was a time where I never even gave incest or foalcon a second thought. A time that I was disgusted by them.
I used to hate incest, but that lovely trilogy from the equally lovely TittySparkles essentially "converted" me. And now there's this...
I would not say that this has fully "converted" me to foalcon, but I can't deny it was good. Very good.
(sigh) It's never an easy thing when passion and morals go to war against each other in your head.
Summarization of this story: i am a terrible person. what the fuck is wrong with me?
Ahhh, what a very enjoyable story this was to read. It's a shame it has so many downvotes like it does. This story doesn't deserve them.
I clopped, I came, I regret nothing. YOU HEAR ME?? I REGRET NOTHING!!
5202009 I'm glad you liked it so much! Thanks for the recommendation :D Clop is at its best when it's a mix of special moments and sex.
5202016 /)
5202100 Ummm, maybe? I wouldn't be against it.
5202115 Enjoy
5202127 Nice to have someone who has no problems with it ^.^
5202238 Hers (his?) was very good. If you're comparing me to her though, I might just start freaking out :P
5202250 You're fine. Trust me.
5202347 Good. No regrets. I hope it was enjoyable at least.
5202160 Well, there is one more hole that hasn't been used... and Rainbow could start entering the rebellious daring teenager age... cogs are spinning ;)
5202363 Well then, slap a bridle in my mouth and call me Sally, I'm ready for whatever chaos ya wanna throw at us!
5202346 I'm dead. So very, very dead. Of happiness at least.
Here lies Pi
Killed from a heart
swelling three sizes
Darn
thanks for update
5202238 thats why i keep my morals in real life and not let them control what i read or find good..if i did then id have a lot less to read...MAH STORIES ARE ON!
I love everything about this story. Might there be a third part in the future, say one where Rainbow takes the reigns so to speak? :3
5202501 If there was a third part, then yes, it'd probably be teenage-ish Rainbow taking the lead.
That was...beautiful. But hot nonetheless.
You are really good at this. It was a pleasant read
i feel so creeped out by the new how many are reading this eye thing.....(24 people thats more that i expected for this kind of fic) Loved it.
...I /think/ she's too young to get preggo....Er...I /hope/ atleast.
5202682 says 34 for me. What did you expect to see here?
5201877 That's what happened with me as well. I don't typically read foalcon. I've read maybe three since I found this site, and if this is the third and not the second, then the first probably disgusted me to the point where I blocked it from my memory. I could never write it myself, either. I've written clop and smut before (and am continuing now), but I'm a little ashamed even of the 17-year-old chararacters used in the one I'm working on currently, and were it to get out that I wrote sex stories featuring underage cartoon horses, it'd probably take weeks for me to start acting normal again.
5202363 This needs to be a thing.
I really wish I could upvote this again, and also call you sick fuck, but I think I am more sick for actually enjoying everything about this fic...
Meh brain...meh thoughts...
I WANT A SEQUEL DAMMIT!
Umm...If you please...
What? What am I saying this is so wrong...yet...so GOOD!
Awesome update, I really liked it. Looking forward to the teen years if you do it. And then Rainbolt fills her to the point it shows.
5202619 :D That was my goal!
5202675
5202906 5202682 I kinda like it; it makes me feel awesome :P
5202879 So, so true.
5202892 I deal with little elementary kids on a weekly basis, so I have a pretty good base to go off. Not to sound creepy :P
5202903 Yeah, she's not gonna get pregnant. Too young ^.^
5203010 I have very few taboo things, so long as everything is still happening with ponies.
5203024 Let's be sick together!
5203054 She sorta already had that happen with the first chapter ;) Cumflation is hot.
5203052 I didn't come up with that. I saw it somewhere else. Can't remember where though.
5203040
5203014
AND THE REST OF THE SEQUEL-WANTING PEOPLE
I wouldn't really be against a sequel (sequel, not additional chapter). An older Rainbow, one who takes more charge and actually knows whats happening. It seems like lots of people want it. I enjoyed writing this one, and would enjoy writing another. It'd have slightly different elements (Dom Rainbow for one), but how does that sound? Upvote this comment if you want a sequel.
Well the fuck train finally derailed...final destination uberhell
Maybe a third chapter where Dashie is introduced into the wild and wonderous world of afternoon anal?
I liked it....
I regret nothing!
5198334
What I am saying is that I couldn't move right then since I had a massive boner and it would be awkward as fuck to walk around like that.
I have a laptop so the computer wasn't hindering my movement.
5203293
I agree!
5203421 Advantage: Baggy, heavy as shit cargo pants. Disadvantage: Zipper-guard on boner. Oh well. I can sit here for another fifteen minutes.
Let's face it.
This was amazing. You made it feel like more of a learning experience, and showed some care for the situation. I honestly came for the story, the why of it, and I was not dissappointed.
5203729 Advantage: Now its nighttime and I can fap to my hearts content
Disadvantage: I'm gonna be sleepy as hell in the morning since I'm up so late, and I have class tomorrow.
5203182 I totally agree with you on that, and in that case she is really going to get filled to the brim
I was thinking Littlepip. That's not a trilogy though.
How do young ponies do that?
This is a pretty good idea actually.
Please continue.
Aww. That's cute. You don't see that too often in Foalcon.
Drugs are bad.
You don't know how much that line pleases me in a nonsexual way(and sexually too). Please keep using it.
Is he going to play this game with other foals? Please say No.
You know that's on the outside right?
Save that for later.
How long has he been without a wife/girlfriend?
Because her body is not girly at all? Curves? Voice?
True. If he had a son though, he would have turned out an even better father.
Is there going to be another chapter? I doubt it.
Can you PM a copy of the pic Sir Author?
No no no... this story isn't complete yet...
Rainbow still hasn't tried anal.
Sit-Rep: The sausage was slaped. Whacked the 'Wonder Whale'. I Beat da meat. The screen was creamed.
And all with out regrets.
Now how to remove cum from a memory-foam pillow...
5203182 It would appear as though the masses have reached a consensus, I do believe a sequel would be very well received.
5203182
Sequels. Sequels everywhere. In case anyone wants to know, a sequel to the pic has also been posted online.
Here's a hint:
33.media.tumblr.com/74b5161721df4c50d6b6862b66022142/tumblr_ne8wrhwrqE1sykyk2o2_1280.png
Amazing chapter once again
5204213
Can you PM me with either the full pic, or link to the full pic?
I want it. I have no shame >.>
I feel so dirty reading this...
SO WORTH IT!!
I need more
5200267 the strangeness of the world i live in is entertaining and stressfful
of course having a pretty blue alicorn princess by my side and asking questions about pron is both of those, like the topic of humanxpony
Luna:... I do not see how him grabbing her tail is enjoyable
as some wankah put it, "Different strokes fr' diffrent blokes"
Luna: and this... Cold-blooded-Twilight artist...
(OH DEAR STARS NO!)
Luna: I quite like their art... what are thes pictures about Ms. way about?
Milky Way? Iono, something about crotch boobs and milk i think
Luna:and Atryl?
... some things are best not knowing my little princess
Luna: And vorarephilia-
NOPE! not explaining that to ya!
Luna: fair enough... hoof and foot fetishes?
your guess is as good as mine on that
like i said, I leave sexuality to her, I just like ponies and duel monsters
Luna: Miiiiiiiiidniiiiiiiiiiight~ Lyra is high again!
I know, I just tied her to the bed, I set up the couch for us
Luna: trots over, resting her head in my lap* writing to a hater?
nope, someone who finds you and lyra driving me bonkers funny
Luna: Oh... pet me~ *puss-in-boots eyes*
... dammit blue horse
i.imgur.com/65tUwvl.png
Nuuuuuuu~
Why can't we see current or so (as in adult) Rainbow approach her dad, remind him about what happened, discuss the morals and then probably bang again. :D