After the late Queen Giulia's death, the newly crowned Queen Amaris must lead the few remaining members of her hive across the Badlands into the chaotic city of Canterlot.
This is my first fanfic ever, and is part of a series I'm planning. Criticism is definitely appreciated.
It's going to pretty much be entirely OCs since it takes place so far outside the traditional timeline.
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Looks like an intriguing story I'll hang around for this series also the writings good to. All in all I think it's a good start.
5066941 Yayyyy! That definitely made my night. Thank you! Anything you think I could improve on? Was it easy to figure out who was talking? I had a few problems making them each sound unique.
5067049 Yeah I was wondering who was who you'll want to figure out a way to give a specific something (sorry best word I could think of to use.
) to show who each character is. Other than that I liked it.
Made a teensy tiny change to the story
Whaaat. This is like 10,000 words! Not 2,000 >ยท>
"Source"? What source?
5080747 Well there's supposed to be a cover image. But apparently there isn't. I'll have to make one. Thanks for pointing that out!
Gotta stop spelling Tilo wrong