Lucky is the luckiest pony in all of Equestria, and the sequence of events that lead to him in bed with the Captain of the Wonderbolts just proves that.
So, either Lucky actually knows that she is the real Spitfire or he really is an incredibly dense moron. Based on the lengths he went to explicitly call her a cos-player and a fake, I would wager option one.
Love the story so far. Only thing that I dislike is that I'm constantly face-hoofing from how dense Lucky is...but it does have a sort of "oh, dear Celestia" charm to it.
5047098 Looks like the author's already settled things by blocking you, but just a fair word of warning: it would be exceptionally unwise for you to comment on this story using your primary account after this demonstration of such mature behavior.
Hey nice story. I look forward to the next chapter.
Lucky
5046998 Wow Henson.... To think you used to be one of my best friends on Xbox no more then a month ago... You've fallen such a long way. You have my sympathies.
I would consider retitling this story if I were you, considering there is a much older and more popular story with the same title. Just to avoid confusion, you know?
The characters are not the same. The setting is not the same. The description is not the same. The cover art is not the same.
Need I search through every single story ever whenever I make a new story just to make sure I'm not somehow causing ripples by titling my story the wrong way? This isn't like it's a unique story title, like 'My Little Dashie' or 'The (repeated title structure) of a (Repeated repeated ProperNoun)', is it?
Am I masquerading this fic as in any way related to the other story? Am I trying to grab fame from it? What possible good reason is there for changing the entire title of my fic just because someone else has the same rather plain title so long ago?
There are over seventy thousand stories on this site.
Do you really think each and every single one has a completely unique title?
Lucky's incredibly dense, manages to convince Spitfire to go on a date with him, and a repeat one later, while managing to keep off paparazzi and fanboys trying to touch her... You lucky son of a bitch...
5047673 5047712 Meh, personally I don't mind, so long as it wasn't deliberately used to defame me or my story. I honestly have always hated the title, but it was the first thing that popped into my head when I started writing. I tried dozens of other titles, and bugged all my friends, and nobody could think of anything better, so I left it alone. Now it's 83k words later... so whatever.
Oh, and in case you were wondering what the hell I'm talking about, I wrote the original Room for Rent.
So yea, have at it, and I hope your story is a popular as mine. Mebbe some new readers will stumble my way by mistake, heh.
Love the story, but the cosplay shtick is getting really fucking tired. There's a fine line between clueless and retarded... and this guy nose-dived over the line. While on fire.
So let me get this straight? He secretly knows that that's the real Spitfire but still refers to her as a cosplayer? Just to keep her on the down low? That's brilliant.
5048710 Umm, do you not understand how to reply to comments? You don't type a person's username, you hit the >> button on the top right of their comment.
5052328 Obviously, the account I blocked was an alt account, and he has a 'proper' account. The mod was warning him that were he to do so, he'd face some pretty harsh responsive action.
And this will continue as I am able! I've been really slow writing recently
Hot damn.
Swag lucky swag
So, either Lucky actually knows that she is the real Spitfire or he really is an incredibly dense moron. Based on the lengths he went to explicitly call her a cos-player and a fake, I would wager option one.
"I wonder if I cut open a leprechaun it will spill out lucky charms"
-That Guy 2014
5046883 I second this statement.
Ugghhhh....
More clop.Why the do you stoop to wrighting dis.
you are a disgrace to the human race.All you fags are.
5045735
5045671 'Ripoff TITILE'. I didn't say it was a ripoff story.
As in: 'it has the same title'.
5046998 give me all your faggety downvotes! I thrive on your disapproval!
Someone just went through disliking all of the comments about liking this story, that asshole. Some day I will get revenge on these fools
Love the story so far. Only thing that I dislike is that I'm constantly face-hoofing from how dense Lucky is...but it does have a sort of "oh, dear Celestia" charm to it.
5047078 *uck you man. I'm proud of my dislike spree.
5047098 And this, people, is how you get on my block list.
this is awesome
5047098 Looks like the author's already settled things by blocking you, but just a fair word of warning: it would be exceptionally unwise for you to comment on this story using your primary account after this demonstration of such
maturebehavior.Dear Lucky Charm
Sincerely, linksbro1
yep this is defiantly looking super duper pony rifick.
Hey nice story. I look forward to the next chapter.
Lucky
5046998 Wow Henson....
To think you used to be one of my best friends on Xbox no more then a month ago...
You've fallen such a long way. You have my sympathies.
I would consider retitling this story if I were you, considering there is a much older and more popular story with the same title. Just to avoid confusion, you know?
5047673 Why...?
The characters are not the same. The setting is not the same. The description is not the same. The cover art is not the same.
Need I search through every single story ever whenever I make a new story just to make sure I'm not somehow causing ripples by titling my story the wrong way? This isn't like it's a unique story title, like 'My Little Dashie' or 'The (repeated title structure) of a (Repeated repeated ProperNoun)', is it?
Am I masquerading this fic as in any way related to the other story? Am I trying to grab fame from it? What possible good reason is there for changing the entire title of my fic just because someone else has the same rather plain title so long ago?
There are over seventy thousand stories on this site.
Do you really think each and every single one has a completely unique title?
Lucky's incredibly dense, manages to convince Spitfire to go on a date with him, and a repeat one later, while managing to keep off paparazzi and fanboys trying to touch her... You lucky son of a bitch...
5047712 It was just a suggestion. No need to be so defensive about it.
Bravo! Bravo! I enjoy this story a lot, great job!
Damnit Anon!
Queen Kuno.
Queen. Kuno.
Finish it!
5048559 no u
>> Anonymous Pegasus
I must concede that I did not forsee this particular comeback.
Touché.
What an interesting sorry to far, a pont so dense as to not realize the real spitfire is with him what an idiot,KEEP WRITING THIS, ITS AWESOMES!
5047673
5047712 Meh, personally I don't mind, so long as it wasn't deliberately used to defame me or my story. I honestly have always hated the title, but it was the first thing that popped into my head when I started writing. I tried dozens of other titles, and bugged all my friends, and nobody could think of anything better, so I left it alone. Now it's 83k words later... so whatever.
Oh, and in case you were wondering what the hell I'm talking about, I wrote the original Room for Rent.
So yea, have at it, and I hope your story is a popular as mine. Mebbe some new readers will stumble my way by mistake, heh.
... I love this
Leash and Collar... my Friday night right there
cant wait for chapter 3
only criticism, and its rather minor and pretty trivial to be honest... why is he so dense?
Love the story, but the cosplay shtick is getting really fucking tired. There's a fine line between clueless and retarded... and this guy nose-dived over the line. While on fire.
5046655
Henceforth I shall imagine Lucky with an Irish Accent.
5049373
He's not, you just rolled really horribly on your Insight.
Unless I rolled really horribly on my Insight, but I have a good modifier, so i'm fairly confident.
5049570 Are you trying to be an ass or funny?
for some reason I was reminded of this.
So let me get this straight? He secretly knows that that's the real Spitfire but still refers to her as a cosplayer? Just to keep her on the down low?
That's brilliant.
5048710 well sonny, I'm waiting. KUNO KUNO KUNO DAMNIT!!
5048710 Umm, do you not understand how to reply to comments? You don't type a person's username, you hit the >> button on the top right of their comment.
5049448 I used a fate point so I think I come up trumps on that
5049704 I have "nothing escapes my sight" I I can tell you he ain't dence in the slightest
5050030 I play necrons in WH40K, Reanimation protocols state I'm coming back to haunt your ass
MFW
I like where this is going. Continue. Please.
I'm trying to figure out when Lucky transitioned from ignorance to playing along. If at all.
I'm liking this so far. Keep it up!
Hehe, I'm really digging into this story I'm just afraid when will his luck run out
can we expect regular updates until you do the NSFW chapter.
or is this story goanna pile up on your list of "incompletes?"
5050847 his luck will run out when he get's Spitfire pregnant
5047280 how can he comment on this story when the whole point of blocking him is so he can't do it
5052328 Obviously, the account I blocked was an alt account, and he has a 'proper' account. The mod was warning him that were he to do so, he'd face some pretty harsh responsive action.
And this will continue as I am able! I've been really slow writing recently
5052388 are you making more chapters to this story? I really would love to read some more
5052507 You're welcome