Still trying to make up for that first story.
Pacific Rim: The movie to end all movies... Now with ponies! (Though technically anthro) This tells the story of Ross and Twilight in Pacific Rim, because it seemed like a good idea...
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I was going to ask who the fuck Ross was, even after looking at your other stories, but then I saw your username.
Yeah, I was sent here by God to tell you that you can stop now.
Sorry..... I felt like doing that.... Wanted to see how that would turn out. LOTS OF PEOPLE DO THAT THOUGH! Don't they? No?
just a few things, 1) do you have someone pre-read your stories? i feel like they jump around too much, 2) maybe you could provide a little more description? there's a lot left to the imagination here. it's hard to picture the surroundings, the jaegers, and your oc. it kind of feels like they're fighting on a blank field, or some kind of giant box.
plot) and i have no idea if you're even thinking of continuing this story, but it feels alright, other than the couple things mentioned before. don't mind others hating on shipping your oc with a mane six character, that's just something that clicks in a reader's mind that either bugs them, or not. 
i have no idea what you're thinking about for a plot-line (
anyway... yeah, sorry if this was too rambly, and if it was confusing... i don't do this often
4873637 Please be my proofreader? I do that myself. So please? As my first watcher? And I do plan on continuing. Also, THANK YOU SO MUCH! Your feedback is brilliant!