All is well and good in Ponyville as everyone goes about their daily business as usual. Nothing special, just an otherwise ordinary day. But, to everyone's surprise, they will soon realize that this won't be an ordinary day as a quake beneath their feet shakes things up and something new appears above their heads. Will it be friendly? Will it be hostile? Will it even be something alive? Whatever the case, the mane 6 have to figure out what's going on and how to get things back to normal
Chapters (3)
This throws a interesting concept on the HiE fics, i like to see where this goes......
Please have him talk about war, crime and poverty. And if he gets all sad about it, or feels like he hates humanity, I'm gonna be mad. I hate when people are guilty about it.
476802 You'll have to wait and find out what happens next. Somethin you prob didn't expect, but a concept you are aware of
Very good daemon lord keep up the good work
Brilliant storyline so far, I wonder what could be waiting for the mane six in the next chapter? I'm ILoveFurries from FJ, by the way :D
I am bewildered.
Hm....Honestly wasn't too swayed by this chapter.
619073 I figured. was kind of a brain fart style chapter. I've been out of it story wise, so I ain't too strong on it, but don't worry, I don't plan to keep it that way for the rest of it all
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xD Good.
619110 Thanks again for your feedback and everythin, you really have no idea how much it means to me, especially comin from someone who sticks with the story
I try my best~ Only saw it had updated because of your mass message on FJ.
619133 Any way is as good as any other I suppose, right? XD
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...What?
619167 Nevermind, ain't an important comment lol
Lose the bit about Dashie getting injured, it doesn't really do anything. Besides, no way should George's weight have given her trouble after a mere hour.
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The injury is planned to be of more significance later on. The weight thing can be argued cause a human can weigh relatively heavy, and an hour is quite a bit of time. Easily it can go either way, but hell, I can just as easily be wrong about it