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The Informant


The one who knows...

Comments ( 10 )

Whoo! :raritystarry:
An interesting idea dude. Don't think I've read or seen a story like this one before. Which makes it unique. :pinkiehappy:

Nice beginning! :twilightsmile:
You were right when you said it was similar to your other story. This one thou has more...promise I think is the right word? It has more options of what can happen in it. :twilightsheepish:
Was this story somewhat inspired my zootopia, I can see some resemblance. Lol
Awesome story! Can't wait to see where it goes.:pinkiehappy:

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I actually originally thought of the concept of this story around 2013. It was more or less inspired by a TV show I can't quite remember. I'll tell you when it comes back to me. Though, I cannot deny I drew some inspirations from Zootopia after it came out. More or less inspired me to do a bit more in regards of the society. Thanks for the compliment, I really appreciate it.

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AND I just thought of it. Defiance is what originally inspired this story.

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Very intense chapter. Xd
While I believe that guy, I'm still a bit wary of him, and will continue so until he completely proves otherwise.
Great chapter! We all know where this is going and who she'll be staying with. That's gonna be an interesting meeting. Lol

Well that's an interesting way of ending the chapter. Lol
Good to find out that not all of the city is curropted by hatred. Xd

An awesome chapter bro! I hope Timothy is the real deal and is not secretly a bad guy.
I must say dude this story is very well written, wish my writing skills were that good. Xd
Who is this 'she' Marco is talking about? Apparently someone very bad who hurt him, a pony perhaps? Likely. What did she do I wonder, mind rape him? Were they in love, like a Romeo Juliet thing? I'm so excited to find out! :pinkiehappy:

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Just some time, patience, and a ton of procrastination. The three key ingredients to my writing. :rainbowlaugh:

This is a story that is more or less 5 years in the making, and most of that time was spent imagining how the story would go. I'm only now writing it and figuring out the finer details. I had a ton of time to think about it to say the least. I'm glad you like it so far.

Also, anyone can write as well as I can. Hell, I'm probably no where near my full potential. You just got to work at it. Find a idea that intrigues you, add your own twists and turns to it, write about it, and see where you can improve. You can write decently with enough practice.

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Very true man, thank you for the awesome tips. I'm actually in the middle of writing a chapter for a story I wish to publish on here myself. Can only hope people like it and I have the patience to continue doing it. Xp

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