An awesome chapter bro! I hope Timothy is the real deal and is not secretly a bad guy.
I must say dude this story is very well written, wish my writing skills were that good. Xd
Who is this 'she' Marco is talking about? Apparently someone very bad who hurt him, a pony perhaps? Likely. What did she do I wonder, mind rape him? Were they in love, like a Romeo Juliet thing? I'm so excited to find out!

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Just some time, patience, and a ton of procrastination. The three key ingredients to my writing.

This is a story that is more or less 5 years in the making, and most of that time was spent imagining how the story would go. I'm only now writing it and figuring out the finer details. I had a ton of time to think about it to say the least. I'm glad you like it so far.

Also, anyone can write as well as I can. Hell, I'm probably no where near my full potential. You just got to work at it. Find a idea that intrigues you, add your own twists and turns to it, write about it, and see where you can improve. You can write decently with enough practice.

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Very true man, thank you for the awesome tips. I'm actually in the middle of writing a chapter for a story I wish to publish on here myself. Can only hope people like it and I have the patience to continue doing it. Xp