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The Light at the end of the Tunnel

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Have you ever wondered what means the "Light" in the Light at the end of the Tunnel?
Is it just...a simple Light,as in the relief in this cruel life we are living in,or is it just something more?
Something else that we are still trying to find an answer?
I'll try to explain a twist in this story,which might be a little bit dark on this site.
Read it with patience,because it is all you need to understand.

Thank you.

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Tailgate

Tailgate #1 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

I was writing a review, but pretty much each sentence contained an error and it would take me over an hour to correct each mistake. Get an editor. You need one, bad.

I'm not sure if English is not your first language or you are just young and it is, but you really have to work on grammar.

Also, what the hell is Choy? It seemed to be a name at first, but then it seemed to be an object. Is it Chinese cabbage?

Silverwind9

Silverwind9 #2 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

4740768 Yes,I know....

I know and I mentioned in my blog post that I had so many grammatical and spelling errors because I was working late at night since I didn't have any free time at day....This should've been posted yesterday but it was,somehow, posted at night again...So yeah,thank you for pointing out mistakes I already knew.

PS. Choy supposed to be a little furball I mentioned in the story.

Nutburger

Nutburger #3 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

>self-insert OC fic
could u not

Silverwind9

Silverwind9 #4 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

4741054 Actually,I've had much,much better stories than this one....

I guess I shouldn't write stories at night or else....

Man,I've practiced writing but I know this is not one of my good ones,but still I think I could've done it better but I was too lazy to check on mistakes.