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datLunarRepublican


I like toytles

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It's a bright, sunny day and everypony is busy. Rainbow Dash is practicing her stunts, FlutterShy is attending to her animals, Applejack's delivering orders of apples, Rarity is making a batch of dresses for an upcoming fashion show, Pinkie is helping out at a birthday party, and Twilight is practicing a new spell that she found from an odd spellbook. But little does she know what the spell actually does...

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That is unnecessairy.

If you plan on correcting someones work, at least make sure you do not have mistakes yourself.

Not to sound like an ass, it just seemed appropriate to point this out.

You seem to be off on a good start, I will be watching. It should be interesting to see what happens to Chell considering there would be no clear portal surfaces in Ponyville, and that nopony would know about sign language.

4909148 The person it was directed towards took no offense, why do you need to?

Finally, i'm back and new. I must make corrections to this story now.... and write some more. And soon you shall see what is to come. I'm not going cliche on this story where chell does sign language and all that stuff. "I'm different."

FINALLY! Done with the first chapter. Sry I didn't write much. I was too distracted with other things in my life. Anyway, I know this chapter is short, but I guarantee they will get longer as the story proceeds. Enjoy! :pinkiehappy:

I'm not done with this chapter yet. I know a couple of people out there didn't expect Twilight to go into Aperture, instead of Chell going into Ponyville. Anyway, check more often on weekends, as that's when I type more. I may type a little bit during the week. That's all the info you need. Enjoy!

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