After Gilda looses her cool, she retreats in haste, flying over the Everfree Forest. She makes the mistake of flying into a harsh storm, but doesn't bother to take cover. She carelessly zips over the wood line disregarding the storm until lightning strikes near her; the force of witch causing her to plummet to the forest below, where she will spend her final hours... for there is evil waiting to devour her.
this is getting read because of the cover pic
This is a great story and I added it to my favorites. It was really sad what happened to poor Gilda. However, I did notice a set of spelling errors that you need to work on and then you might want to put your story into more separate paragraphs. Again this story was very sad and heart warming.
very sad, of course, that was the purpose i guess, so good job
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434021yessssss, lol
Would? - Alice In Chains
nice story. u have earned five big macs congrats
WHAT AM I DOING LOOKING THROUGH THE SAD FIC SECTION? DO I WANT TO DROWN?
436648 i dunno, but thx for chosing mine lol
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I felt like reading something. Then I realised. This isn't the comedy section... Fuck....
gilda, you stupid. if some thing is tring to break your neck like that (which actually doesn't work, but for the sake of this story lets say it does) do these things.
1. bite hand on face.
2. spin so you are lieng flat.
3. continue to move your left arm to come up and hit assaliant in face, preffera ble ear so they/it is stunned.
4.neutralize target.
morbid watermelon is morbid.
(Heavy react on me)
Heavy:KEEP CRYING BABY AHAHAHAHAHAHA
Me:*sob sob* BWAAAAAAAAA
Since gilda is one of the best character on the show, i was sad. (also why did i search a gilda fanfic with Dark and sad?)
made me hey! you earned lots of saddies.