My Little Pirates
By Fullmetal Pony
Chapter One: Landing! The All-Pony Island, Equestria
“You're sure this is safe?” Twilight Sparkle bit her lip as she glanced at the large dark cloud over her home. A couple of pegasi flew around it, tapping it here and there and producing a few raindrops. Some drops landed on Twilight's back and she wiped them off with a hoof.
“Don’t worry about it,” Rainbow Dash said while floating in the air near Twilight. “You said the tree was beginning to feel dry anyway. A nice rainstorm is just what it needs.”
“I know.” Twilight smiled up at Dash. “It’s nice that you’re doing this and all, but I’m still a little worried about the books.”
"Eh, watering one tree is nothing compared to when we have to roll out the big storms," Dash confidently replied. She flew away from Twilight and over to a section of the cloud that was dispersing rain at a much faster rate than the rest of the cloud.
“Don’t worry, sugarcube," said Applejack as she gave Twilight a reassuring pat on the back. "Your tree has stood up to much worse... Ah think Rarity and Ah can attest to that."
Twilight giggled a little. “I guess you’re right. I’m still a little anxious about the books. Some of them were on loan from the Canterlot Library."
Applejack raised an eyebrow.“Why do ya need books from there? Ain’t ya got all the books ya need here?”
“Normally, but I’ve been trying to find books on Tartarus and only the Canterlot Library has anything on it.”
“Why even bother studying about that place? From the way ya looked after coming back from there, it seems like a mighty nasty place.”
“That’s the thing, I didn’t actually go there." Twilight trotted back and forth as she spoke. "There’s just this really big gate that leads to Tartarus and that’s what Cerberus guards. I mean, the gate looked pretty solid, I couldn’t even see the top of it, but I’m still worried. What if one of the monsters inside escapes? We were able to get Cerberus back to the gate this time, but what if it happens again?”
Something tugged at Twilight's mane. She looked down and was met with Spike's concerned expression. “Um, not to use a really bad pun, but shouldn’t you just let sleeping dogs lie?”
“Not if the sleeping dog is something like Discord,” Twilight replied. “Besides, it’s not like I’m ever actually going back there. I just want to know what's in Tartarus.”
“Okay.” Spike slanted his eyes at Twilight. He knew Twilight’s quest for knowledge often overwhelmed her common sense, “Just be ca— jeez!” Spike ducked just as a lightning bolt zoomed past him, singeing his tail.
“Derpy!” Dash yelled.“Again?”
Applejack looked up at the cloud and then at Twilight. “Maybe it would be a good idea to move those books.”
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The hairs stuck up on Fluttershy’s neck as she trotted through the Everfree forest. Angel had an upset stomach and nothing she’d tried had helped. Twilight was sorting out a mess that arranged storm had caused over her house earlier today, so Fluttershy didn’t want to bother her. That left Zecora as the only option. “Come on, Fluttershy, you can do this,” she said to herself as she walked through the dark forest. “It’s for Angel’s sake. Besides, the Everfree isn’t so scary when you th—”
A loud thud caused Fluttershy to jump a few feet into the air, but she quickly fell to the ground and hugged herself. “W-what was that?” Her eyes darted around the forest as she cowered on the ground. “Oh, please don’t be a monster.” She listened closely for any more noises, but didn’t hear anything. “M-maybe whatever it was went away. “Oh, I hope it didn’t hurt any animals..."
Fluttershy pushed her hooves into the ground and got back up. She took a breath and stared off in the direction the noise had come from. Her hooves silently trotted along the forest floor as she made her way over to where the sound had come from. Something crashed down in front of her and made her dart behind a tree. Her heart felt like it was in her throat. She swallowed and managed to peak her head around the tree.
The forest was silent once more. The only thing that had changed was a large broken branch now stood a few feet ahead of where Fluttershy had been standing. She went over to check on the branch and drew in her breath when she saw the way it was snapped clean from whatever tree it had come from. "W-what could break a tree l-like that?"
"Mugha," a voice moaned.
The voice made Fluttershy freeze. Her eyes slowly crept to her left. Broken branches were scattered around a single spot: gigantic paw print. Her eyes widened when she noticed the unmistakeable shape of a pony in the center of the print. A blue vest rested over his tan coat and a yellow straw hat with a a red stripe sat ajar his black mane.
“Oh no!” Fluttershy rushed over to the pony and quickly tossed him on her back and glimpsed a hat on his flanks that matched the one on his head. “It’ll be okay! We’ll just get you to Zecora! Oh, how could I have not noticed an Ursa minor!"
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“... so I picked him up and brought him here as fast as I could,” Fluttershy finished explaining to Zecora.
Zecora nodded and then looked over to her bed. The tan pony rested in it, oblivious to the world. She noticed one of his eye twitch. “It seems our unfamiliar friend is about to awaken once again.”
“Oh, thank goodness, I was so worried.” Fluttershy trotted next to bed.
The pony slowly opened his eyes and yawned. He smacked his lips started to push himself up. "Ugh, I'm hungry.
Fluttershy gently laid a hoof on the pony's chest to prevent him from straining himself. “It’s okay, you’re in Zecora’s hut... oh, but, um, you probably wouldn’t know that if you’re from out of town.”
“A tourist would be most likely to tread through the Everfree so lightly,” Zecora cautioned.
“Whoa! A talking zebra!" The pony immediately pushed past Fluttershy's feeble restraint and darted over to Zecora. He circled around her with an excited expression on his face and examined her from various angles. "That’s so cool!”
“Oh my, you seem quite energetic and a little hectic.” Zecora backed herself to a wall, so that, at least, the pony couldn't get behind her.
“I’m just glad he’s okay,” said Fluttershy.
Fluttershy's words brought the pony's attention over to her. “Oh, wow! A talking flying horse!" He abandoned his interest in Zecora and started examining Fluttershy instead. "I mean, there was Pierre in Skypeia, but he couldn’t talk! That’s awesome!”
“I... um...” Fluttershy choked on her words. Oh, he’s like Pinkie! I don’t know how to deal with that much energy in a stallion! “Are... are you feeling okay?”
“Hmm? Well...” The pony brought a hoof up to his muzzle. “Ahh!”
“What?” Fluttershy instinctively cowered and covered her head.
“I have hooves! That’s so weird!” The pony turned his head and looked over his body. “What did that bear guy do to me?”
“Oh no! Zecora! I think he lost his memory!" Fluttershy exclaimed. She turned her attention back to the pony. “Okay... okay... take this slow. Nice and slow. Do you know who you are?”
“That’s a stupid question," the pony nonchalantly replied. "I’m Luffy, the future pirate king.”
“Y-y-you’re royalty?" Fluttershy stuttered. "But... but I thought only the Princesses could be rulers.”
"No, no, not like an actual king..." Luffy paused and tapped a hoof to his chin. "... I think." He then looked down at his hoof as it tapped at his chin. "Whoa, that is freaky."
"Oh my.” Fluttershy turned toward Zecora, her eyes were wide like dinner plates. “I think he must have hit his head too. Is there anything you can do to help?”
“Regarding loss of memory, I am unsure if I have the proper remedy,” Zecora replied.
“Um...” Luffy patted his stomach with a hoof. “Just wondering, do you have any food?”
“I have many types of berries that I'm sure with make you merry," said Zecora. "I also have other different plate of mine on which you can dine."
“Ya got any meat?” Luffy interrupted.
“Meat?” asked Fluttershy.
“Ya know, cows, pigs, fish... just something to eat.” Fluttershy’s face drained of color with each animal Luffy listed. “You okay?”
“Eeeee!” Fluttershy's wings flapped open and she fled out of Zecora's hut.
“What’s her problem?” Luffy asked Zecora.
“Perhaps return of memory is the right cure,” Zecora anxiously looked at Luffy,”for you see, of meat ponies do not usually procure.”
“What?”
“Eating meat is most forbidden, for ponies of that I am certain.”
“Noooo!” Luffy's body went limp and he collapsed to the ground.
Equestria. Location: Grand Line. All the citizens of this island belong to a race of magical horses, colloquially referring to themselves as ponies. It is a tranquil land. There’s also no meat.
So far I like this story. It seems interesting.
MOOAAARRR!!
YES, ONE PIECE I LOVE YOU!
ONE PIECE!!! WHOOO!!!
I think I know why you chose to omit the other straw hats...
Oh yeah. Zoro would chop up everything with One-sword style, Sanji's bucks would obliterate everything, Nami would con everyone, Usopp, Robin and Chopper....they'd be ok. Franky and Brook would scare everyone shitless.
Faved and thumbs up'd. Update soon please
NO MEAT!? He's dead.
Beat me to it! I was gonna do a One Piece crossover, but after I had finished the first chapter I realized I really wasn't inspired enough, I'm really glad to see one here though! Keep up the great work!
I miss Onepiece. Did they ever get through the childhood filler stuff? I miss my drug- er, one of my favorite animes!
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The time is the Great Pirate Era. Countless pirates fight desperately for the One Piece, the great treasure left behind by Gold Roger
It's actually Gol D. Roger. Gold Roger was the 4kids version where they essentially GUTTED most of the story.
Not to say it was a bad show, I liked the English intro more than the MANY japanese ones, I just liked the original one more.
this better be good *le big fan of one piece*
edit: quite good, looking forward to more
At first i was all like ya cool story
and then i was like O HELL WHAT IS HE GONA EAT
412060 Oh lord, that thing on Cartoon Network? They stopped because the story got too dark and violent for 4kids to pull off. Find the Funimation translation (they were pretty far along last I checked) or watch it in Japanese online. I'm guessing you aren't up to date, and no spoilers anyway, but Gol D. Roger's nickname from the government actually was Gold Roger, like Luffy is Straw Hat Luffy.
There were a few minor things that were incorrect in the story, mostly punctuation errors, but well written overall.
Also, I wonder if as a pony Luffy would even be able to digest meat. But then, he is Luffy.
yes MEAT!
I have one thing to say...i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/172/644/imagen%20luffy2.jpg
YES! Just got back into One piece and loving it all over again!
considering Applejack was seen with a ham sandwich in season 1 episode 22, I'm sure he's ok eating things that come from pig
This is very good! I love how you got Luffy's personality right. Just one thing though. If you don't mind, if Luffy is going to use more of his moves,insted of Gum-Gum could you maybe change it to Gomu-Gomu no? It would help make the story more real for me.
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Oh yeah, there's a reason my avatar is Pinkie dressed as Luffy
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May the 4kids dub be forever stricken from our minds!
Yeah, I know my grammar has issues and I apologize for that.
And for those of you not caught up with the series yet Here's the official website I don't know how many dubbed episodes are up on Funimation's site but I believe everything except for the CP9 (coming this summer though yay favorite arc) and Thriller Bark (i.e. the point where you realized 4kids seriously bucked up) is there subbed or buy the collection sets for this awesome series.
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Oh I love the internet
412060 Then read the danged manga
I'm kicking myself for not thinking of this sooner.
Horay, finally, the other one piece crossovers aren't as good as this, WRITE MORE!
I'm a huge One Piece fan... and oh my god... this is the One Piece/FiM fic I always wanted to read! I can't wait for more!
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Can't. Library doesn't have it, and most websites want me to pay to read it, and the last time I tried to DL free it I almost got a virus.
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didn't notice that whos your fave?
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Fav Pony or OP character, aw well both:
-Pony: Fluttershy (mane 6), Apple Cobbler (bg pony), Luna (overall)
-OP: Ussop
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pony: rarity(mane 6), zecora(bg), nightmare moon(overall)
op: sanji
Its been a while since I checked in the the Straw Hat Crew's adventures...
KING OF THE PIRATES
412728 I just google "One piece" and its the first read link
I like it. Well-written and funny.
Just a little CC: You may want to seperate into paragraphs. Squeezing the sentences together isn't really a good way to go. Other than that; liked and tracked.
who would be faster, Luffy´s gear second or Rainbow Dash´s sonic rainboom?
fantastic
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Better question which would hurt more Nami's thunderbolt tempo or Derpy's "accidental" lightning strike?
Speaking of which I think somewhere down the road I'll do one shots of other Straw Hats in Equestria (think What if scenarios) but for now this is Luffy's story a'la the Paramount War Saga (yeah St is going down!)
psst. hey
moar
My little one piece my little one piece, im gonna be come king of the pirates!
Now to find a chorus and were in business!
also a letter to the poster (hold on this is gona be a long one)
*large intake of air*
If you will remember in the Impel down arc of the series luffy got seriously poisoned to the point of death the only option was for Emporio Ivankov to use a super powerful healing hormone to cure him of his poison a side affect of this not yet known is that luffy is immune to almost all deadly and non deadly poisons (learned this in the fishman island arc) i mearly find it odd that he could survive a poison that could kill a whale but poison joke can make him pass out
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Story wise Luffy's time in Equestria is the same time he would have spent in Amazon Lily, so he doesn't have that ability (or any post-time skip powers for that matter)
418423 o ya now i feel like an idiot im sorry
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Perfectly fine, it let's me nerd out over One Piece, which I'm perfectly happy to do.
418497 NERD FIGHT
WHERE was Zoro when he did his first cannon named attack
WHERE was Sanji when he did his first DIable named attack
WHAT Was the verry first nammed attack in the manga
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Skypeia fighting ohm
Tower of Justice fighting Jabera (so confused on his name)
Gum-Gum Pistol I believe
418588 NICE
How many souls did luffy absorb to become nightmare luffy
What is the name of the wood used to make the sunny
Were was the first time chopper when monster point
Name the only all the people to fight all 3 navy admirals
Who protects Fishman Island
Will you be my friend
What was your favorite story arc
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100 (Moria absorbed 1000)
Adam the Jewel Tree (also made Gol D. Rodger's Ship)
When he was testing out the rumble ball (destroyed an entire village on drum island)
(I don't fully understand the admiral question)
Was Whitebeard, then big Mom, currently Luffy (kinda)
CP9 Saga- showed just how awesome Ussop could be and has in my mind the most epic and brutal fight of one piece (that wasn't completely one sided)
419143 the only people to fight Kizaru, Akainu and Aokiji were Luffy, marco, and Edward Newgate
i think im missing one
Hmm, you have piqued my interests proceed.
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Seriously? And besides that I have a question for Fullmetal Pony. What's going to happen on Amazon Lily, Impel Down, and Marineford without Luffy being present?
412267 I'm a vegetarian myself, and have always told myself that Equestrians have perfected the art of soy-based meals.
This looks like it will be a lot of fun. Loved the manticore's reaction to hungry Luffy.
XD You have my attention
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t38DPnkDjTM
this fits in the story :D
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a multi chapter story that's a one piece crossover..and its featured?! all of my want
to think luffy had to go without meat its like his personal hell, obviously kuma has a sense of humor...a sick twisted sense of humor