i hate ponies....... yeah. theres not much else to say.
Rarity was out looking for gems, gems that were precariously near the edge of a cliff. She spots a very big one near the very edge of the cliff, and goes to fetch it. Suddenly, the ground beneath her hooves gives way, and she finds herself falling to her imminent demise.
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Hey, tell doctor_whoves I said hi :P
I swear to Celestia if Cloud wins I'm going to go ballistic.
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i cant wait for you to go ballistic
fav
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you so brav
on another note I have started on ep 2
2123132 thanks cant wait
cant wait for this to break 200
or even 1000.... pipe dream atm tho
only 1 page into ep 2
I made a new blog entry for the series. This blog Details Wingipeg and has a little background on Aeroblades.
helloo there cloud ...
remember me?`
im from zie forumfield ;o
good story sofare ^^ gonna read the rest later :3
2184079 who u
It just came to my attention one of my editor added things i did not notice when i went over it before submitting....
falcon punch was not suppose to be there.
Don't like the story at all.
But don't get me wrong, the grammar is good, there is a good balance of dialogues, actions and descriptions; the various characters seems to act accordingly to the canon ( if not a little too pushy about being friends ) and the ( only so far ) chapter is long enough to encompass everything.
My main complaint is the OC main character. It SCREAM Gary Stu and I hate these kind of characters with passion. I find it awfull enough to ruin the story by it's presence. And the fact that it's obviously the author OC self-insert make it worse for me.
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most defiantly not a Gary-stu
Oh hello Cloud! :D
Despite this chapter being unfinished, it's pretty good. Pacing is fine, much better than most, although I found a few mistakes in capitalization :3
Anyway, bye bye! :P
man ui have been having a bad long few months, no writing done because i just cant get into it for whatever reason. I apologizes
I appologize to everyone!
i have not been able to write due to a combo of classes and
bad timing I really want to being this out more often, i fee I am letting everyone down right now!
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Is this story dead?