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I liked the fact that you did add in that scene, it made the chapter flow through nicely.
I really liked how this turned out. Its very clear that Babs effectively punished herself, and the rest of the CMC realized what they did was also wrong (with many an 'I told you so' from Sweetie Belle).
There's still the issue of what Diamond Tiarra and Silver Spoon had been doing sneaking around the CMC clubhouse, considering that it is so deep into the Apple family's property. If they came on their own, they were trespassing, but if Filthy Rich brought his daughter along for a business visit and she got sent off to play with Apple Bloom (and had happened to have brought a friend along), then it's a case of the adults not realizing how bad the situation between the kids is getting. Or they are aware and are trying to get them to be more friendly on their own (and its not working).
If what some of us suspect is true, then a lot of the bullying should go away once Filthy Rich stallions up and sets aside a reasonable amount of time to be with his daughter. And not just by bringing her along on business visits. There is a reason its called 'quality time' and not 'quantity time' after all...
This story...
So good
That's all I have to say
5024743 Yes, yes it is.
Assassins creed anyone?
"Good job my little diamond in putting them dirty blank flanks in there place."