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The SCP Foundation. A symbol of safety and defense from all things paranormal and alien. Most of the personal take pride in there job here, of the role they play to keep Earth and Humanity safe.

James hates it.

He wants out. There are only one things keeping him from leaving. His past. All he wants is one chance to start over. He got that chance when a portal sends him to Equestria. A magical world inhabited by talking equines.

Can James start over with the help of friends or will his past catch up to him?

More importantly, Can he stop SCP-049 from harming his new friends?

Note: Story title is subject to change.

Link to SCP-049

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

The plague doctor? Immediately added to read later

I'll get the nice out of the way first: SCP in Equestria? Oh hell yes!

For the not so nice: ** Critique omitted and sent as PM due to nature of feedback **

Also, you should be nice to the readers who have no idea what the SCP is. Include a link to SCP-049 in your main description at the very least.

Nice concept, but... Well... Do you need some help? 'Cause this is a real piece of work, and I'd be happy to help.

Pyra Lira Thank you. I would love some help. Sorry guys but i'm still new to writing and unfourtantly there are no writing courses in my school. Just the normal Language Arts Classes.

The story is great but their is a lot of spelling errors. Also you should give your characters a little more backround in the next chapters. And not everyone knows the story of the SPC so maybe include some backround. And tell how James joined the SPC.
P.S SPC-049 hopeful you know all about him. Anyways keep it up and I will read it :D

xxgreentunaxx thank you for reading my story. Im fixing those right now. The thing is that I was in a rush to publish this before school starts so I forgot to check for mistakes. Also i'm a bit of a bad speller. And more background is what I have planned for the other characters in the later chapters.

Funny thing is that there was a foundation tale about the higher ups being fed up with people using scps to open portal s to equestria.

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That was fucking awesome. :rainbowlaugh:

Bonus points because it used the phrase "I'd shoot you chucklefucks in the face myself"

SCP-021 on James. Best I could come up with.

Sorry if it seems to long time sense an update. I've had school to deal with so it might be a little bit before the next chapter is here but i promise it will be soon.

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