4489123 I think people might be downvoting more for the lack of clop in a mature fic marked for sex. It is highly interesting, far as I've read, at least.
4487262 And it turns out the bicorns are secretly the biproducts of the satanic ritual. PLOT TWIST!
4489123 While I am glad that you like it, please refrain from insulting people that downvoted the story. They are certainly entitled to their opinion. There could be many reasons for these downvotes, and unless they manifest, we won't know for sure.
Still, thank you for coming to our defense.
4489191 You made a good point here. After discussing it with my collab partner, we did come to the conclusion it came off as a tease and changed it. And, of course, we will do our best to keep you interested.
Okay you seem to have a knack for dialogue. And, what's more, the bicorn angle is an interesting concept. However, there is one problem I'd like to address with this story. Aside from the somewhat nice moment with the foal (Pipsqueak I think it was), I'm not seeing any real reason to connect with the main characters.
Well, we are aware of the amount of dialogue vs descriptions in this fic. It's something we want to work on more, polish it.
About the characters though, I'm not sure what to tell you here. We decided that we would use a somewhat slower pace to have the readers discover more every chapter, and that includes Pierre and Edward. They'll have their moments.
In any case, thank you for sharing your opinion with us. We appreciate it.
4523281 Strange how i always seem to come back to your fics, yet another great one, absolutely love the dialogue between pierre and edward, and after reading about that i can see them getting captured and used as living lucky charms :P
Two horned unicorns?
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4489123 I think people might be downvoting more for the lack of clop in a mature fic marked for sex. It is highly interesting, far as I've read, at least.
4487262 And it turns out the bicorns are secretly the biproducts of the satanic ritual. PLOT TWIST!
4489123 While I am glad that you like it, please refrain from insulting people that downvoted the story. They are certainly entitled to their opinion. There could be many reasons for these downvotes, and unless they manifest, we won't know for sure.
Still, thank you for coming to our defense.
4489191 You made a good point here. After discussing it with my collab partner, we did come to the conclusion it came off as a tease and changed it. And, of course, we will do our best to keep you interested.
Okay you seem to have a knack for dialogue. And, what's more, the bicorn angle is an interesting concept. However, there is one problem I'd like to address with this story. Aside from the somewhat nice moment with the foal (Pipsqueak I think it was), I'm not seeing any real reason to connect with the main characters.
4516181 Hmmmm...
Well, we are aware of the amount of dialogue vs descriptions in this fic. It's something we want to work on more, polish it.
About the characters though, I'm not sure what to tell you here. We decided that we would use a somewhat slower pace to have the readers discover more every chapter, and that includes Pierre and Edward. They'll have their moments.
In any case, thank you for sharing your opinion with us. We appreciate it.
Man, Edward is pretty rude isn't he?
4523281 Strange how i always seem to come back to your fics, yet another great one, absolutely love the dialogue between pierre and edward, and after reading about that i can see them getting captured and used as living lucky charms :P
Knowing what we know in future chapters this line is fucking heartbreaking.
Dammit, outside context, the summary, the cover art, complete and utter fuckery is just practically expected.
Now it's revealed that they're the living example of a lucky rabbit's foot.
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True that