• Published 20th Sep 2014
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No One Cried When I Cried - well_thishappened



When a pony cries others are always there for them: helping them, calming them. But sometimes they have no other ponies, nopony to help them, to bring them up when they feel down, these are those pony's stories.

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Trixie = Her mother was abusive, and her sister committed suicide after she was stabbed in the neck, but the hospital bills were to expensive and her mum had to sell Trixie as a slave, the owner was even more abusive but died of lung cancer due to constant smoking, her son set her free in return for all her wealth and fame going to him. She wandered the streets with no luck but then finally found her talent in magic, she then managed to create a small living but still all the fame going to the slave owner's son, one time she doesn't give the fame to him and creates a small name for herself, but the guy comes and demands that she give him all her money and everything she owns and from now on all fame, she gets really mad and gives him (shoots him in the head) the gun that he was threatening her with. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Trixie Lulamoon

Chrysalis = She wanted to be good, she hated her mother for trying to make her evil or her father for punishing her when she acted nice, when she tried to make peace with the griffons they shunned her out and called her a pest, a few trying to eat her, she came back beaten up and furious, so much that she kicked over a neighbours pot, it wasn't much for most but for her it was horrible, her father saw and she immediately prepared herself to apologise only for him to smile, come over to her and hug her, smile at her, love her, she was full for the first time and never wanted to go back to being hungry, so if that means being evil, so be it, as long as she didn't have to starve anymore. At school people bullied her and called her weak for only being able to kick over a plant pot and be sorry about it, she was kicked and beat up and even shunned by the teachers until she finally snapped, her father died and her mother was so furious that she(the mother) killed the ling that killed him (the queens husband) but was murdered for reason, everyling was mean and teased her about how evil her entire family was but how good she was, she snapped when she snapped her best friend's neck (her best friend was just the only ling who didn't tease her and tried to act nice to her) she loved the feeling of cleansing the world for the better so much that she went around killing everyling who was mean or evil (to her) and torturing the others for not stopping the evils, everyling feared her so much that when she asked if she could rule them into cleansing the world. By the time that she was sixteen everyling was nice and only the highly trained guards ever held a weapon, she had cleansed all of the changeling race but the others must feel her blessing, she went around the surrounding areas cleansing them and forcing them to either die, become a changeling, or a recruit. Sadly during all the adventure she eat a type of rotten meat and her thoughts were twisted so badly that they were practically reversed, she still want them to be good but her good was now other's evil. She devised a grand plot to cleans the main continent, Equestria so she invaded canterlot, it failed and for the first time she was hungry again, but not just for love but also for power and fear, she decided that since all lings no longer feared her or loved her that she would make them, she walked over to the male ling that she recently became mats with, called all lings over to her, and ripped of his head for a demonstration, as she was about to swallow she stopped and thought, what am I doing, how will this help the world, this is just evil. She stopped for a moment but smiled then swallowed. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Queen Chrysalis, Supreme Ruler Of The Changelings

Gummy: (Never mentions who it is) Master stole him from his mother when he was just a few weeks old, master tortured him by putting him in horrible costumes and outfits then showed him off to everything. His name was just a painful tease of his mutation that he got due to being taken away from his mother too early. Master speaks so high pitched and rapidly that it hurts him and he has started to go deaf so master just speaks louder, every living moment for him is pure torture. In real chapter dwell further on these ideas. But now it's time for revenge, now it's time to gain control and punish all that hurt him. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried. ~ Him, Servant Of Master

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Gummy stepped out of Sugarcube corner, a knife in his jaws.

Derpy: I was born defective, well sort of, she was born with the capability of brain mess up, when she was about 8 and had a life she fell while rock climbing giving herself the last tip into defectivity, she lost all her friends except for one who was small and had lots of conditions and could empathise, her friend died when she was sixteen and found that she was pregnant with a child that once born she named Dinky. And so her life as a defective, single, foal-treated, forced solitary mother began. One of the few times that she actually smiled was when she found out that her daughter was normal, and that she had friends. When Dinky was about 6 she found that people stopped knowing her as her real name (Bubbling Muffin) and started knowing her as, even her 'friends' Dinky's mom. She tried to tell them to stop but, in doing so made a complete fool of herself and ponies started treating Dinky like an adult more then her. She decided to embrace the one few things that made her happy still: muffins. Soon she was known for muffins, and one of the few saying her damage hadn't messed up so much on: I just don't know what went wrong. When she decided to ask for help from one of her 'friends' they would think of an excuse, even the element of generosity, refused to and made up a half hearted excuse. On night after being tormented once again for her defective eyes, and speech, and control of her body, she came home to find Dinky, the one pony that she could trust to help her sitting on the couch watching TV, she was amazed and when Dinky saw her she asked what's wrong, Derpy sat down and talked about the usual teasing, she then looked at her daughter, and asked what her name was, Dinky stuttered before saying Derpy Hooves... No, maybe Ditzy Doo...' Derpy tells her her real name and Dinky asks if she's sure, Derpy gets mad and tells her to stop acting like that, she then apologises and asks her if she can help her do the dishes, Dinky asks if she's sure that Derpy can handle that, then when Derpy asks if she'll do it for her she creates an excuse about homework. Derpy is so mad that she commands Dinky to come in the kitchen and starts throwing dishes and cutlery into Dinky's arms asking can you not handle this? She does it so viciously that when she gives Dinky a knife it stabs her, Derpy sees it and stops for a second before pulling it out and repeating the process even after Dinky is dead. Derpy then stops to catch her breath and looks at the mess on the floor then she mimics 'I just don't know what went wrong!'. She sighs and cleans up the mess, has dinner as normal, then goes up to bed, opening the door to say goodnight to Dinky when the realisation dawns on her. She then smiles and makes a nonchalant noise. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo/ Bubbling Muffin

Octavia: My parents didn't want me, but by law and social class they had to, not that I actually helped their social class, as soon as I was of legal age they threw me onto the street, I was in the middle of a music course at university, what? just because they hated me didn't mean that they didn't nurture me. They made me do what they wanted to do, many still say it was fat, just like my cutie mark says, but they never did tests to see if being forced to do something since you were capable of holding an object (but still dropping it) up until they were 18 would have any effect on one's cutie mark (I got my cutie mark when I was 14 for the record), I had nothing except my bow tie, my bass, and my class. I was taken in by a kind but over excited mare who and I quote: 'At day they call me: Vinyl Scratch, but at night they scream: DJ Pon3!*Insert Echo effect*' she was nice enough to let me stay at her place until things picked up, of course they never did so I stayed with her, we became roommates, and I'm having my first concert, she's there in the audience hooting away as the other ponies just clap, (go on about the concert more) the concert ends and Octavia, is greeted by her parents, they suddenly act nice and accepting, when Oct says no they get mad, soon they start to argue and the father snaps her bow, Oct is so mad that if they want to break her bow how bout the cello as well, and smashes it on their head until they die, freaking out she goes and pretends to come back from the toilet and acts as if someone murdered them, when the police ask she says the first pony she can think of (Vinyl) and Vinyl gets taken away in jail, Oct acts sad and angry but really is giggling at how easy it was. Later in the apartment Oct reads the head lines: 'Murderer Vinyl Scratch Is Executed' Oct looks sad at first but then smiles and says "Well, that's another pony on my killed list, let's see if I can make it four, maybe even five if I really try". Ends with:

'No one Cried When I Cried' ~ Octavia Philharmonica

Glitchy Cyclops pony: Mutant they called me, I had to fend for myself when my parents disowned me, I raised myself in the woods, I got my cutie mark when I hid myself and went to a concert, I've finally decided to come back, nopony knows I'm alive anymore, but they will, whether it be seeing me in the living or not seeing me in hell, if being raised around timber wolves has taught me anything it's that savage is the best answer, savage gives you peace, savage gives you food. So when I meet civilisation again, there's going to be no stopping me, I'm going to be savage and I'm not going to have mercy, mercy is for the weak, mercy is for the loved, mercy is for the normal. Cyclops pony walks outside, grinning like a mad man, stalks down Fluttershy near the edge of the forest, and grins just like the timber wolf beside him. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Cyclops pony/ Outcast

Luna: (always sad) I just wanted to be loved, for my dear night to be loved, describe night, sister was loved, day was loved, describe day, but when I asked for just a mere few more hours of night I was scorned, they laughed at me, gave me petty reasons that were irrelevant and then left me. If they won't let me have more night then I'll let myself, I am a princess and I demand respect, none shall stand in my way, the night shan't take just a mere hour more it shall encompass the day completely, the night will last forever. Luna walks out into the night describe transformation and the landscape, she flies into the sky. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Luna Nocturne

Nightmare moon: (constant omnipotence and contempt, sadistic almost) I didn't know it was possible the elements beat me, the world was in panic (describe), then that white prick sunbutt came with the elements and banished me to the moon, (dwell on the fact that she thinks that moon is a punishment it's not), I'm not mad about the moon thing anymore or at least not in comparison. When I first heard the screams I had to admit it was mesmerising (describe the screams with pleasure) continue on the pain thought, how did it come to this, describe events without sadness. I suppose I should be sad but I feel no regrets (list things she might regret). Though I may be eviller than ever I feel at peace, the moon is a beautiful place (describe moon). When I get back I will find Sunbutt, torture her in the most horrible ways possible then while she's dying send her to the sun, let her suffer, the sweet innocent loving sister has gone, a stronger, better, merciless model has replaced her (continue on that thought track). Yes, let the weak runt I once was leave, dissipate, I'm here now, and when I get to Equestria, they'll now it. If Celestia is that nice then she can greet the others on their trek to Tartartus. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Luna Nocturne Nightmare Moon

Pinkamina: I don't want to hurt them, but the voices tell me to, I don't believe them, I know they would never do anything like that (according to mane 5 something bad they wouldn't do but is still related to them), but sometimes they're so convincing it's hard not to believe them, I just want them to stop. Sometimes now I find myself believing them so I hide myself from them, but in order to do that I need to hide myself in my room, now my only friends are Rocky (describe him), Mr. Turnip (describe all), Sir Lintsalot, Madame le Flour, they're my best and only friends, they understand me when I act introverted, when I'm happy, when I'm scared and always know what I'm thinking, they also understand and support me in everything even when I asked them If it's right for me to trust the voices, like I said they always support me and never lie, when I asked them if it would be alright to stop my friends from hurting others by killing them they responded with great support and certainty so I know when i stop them I'm doing the right thing. Pinkamena Diane Pie stepped out of Sugarcube corner (describe her) stalked along the empty streets of Ponyville to a large oak with flickering candle light pouring into the streets. She walks over to the old wooden door and knocks hard three times. Twiloght comes tot the door.
"Oh hello Pinkie... You're looking different..." Twilight notices the faint glimmer of a sharp metal object in Pinkie's mouth, A smirk holding it in place. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ Pinkie Pie Pinkamena Diane Pie

Other: Tormentors, abuse, fear, hate. These things made me into what I am today, a cold blooded killer. No mercy was given to me so no mercy is returned. Past is abuse. Present is tormentors. Future is fear. Life is hate. I'm amazed nopony suspects me, I guess that's a benefit of being forgotten. Continue like this for a while. I'm still a pony and I still have a soul, because of this weakness I have come up for many forms of mental defence from further insanity (list a few). But the one that helps me the most must be thinking of it not as them dying but as sending them on a journey, instead of calling them dead I call them departed, it isn't much but it helps. The first pony that I sent on a journey was a filly, she was small with a pale violet coat and emerald eyes and periwinkle mane, her voice was twangy and irritating, she teased me everyday and tried to hurt me and my pet, time went on and I got to furious and (describe the killing with emotion), talk about the next killing (a police pony(the only one that knew)), then the next big milestone (his parents(he was unstable and they were acting mean and about to punish him)). List the amount of departed ponies and naming a few of the important ones. Talk more about why he did that and his 'regrets', it's time to take it further (conspiracy theory for celestia and luna) I need to take action, like I said, I'm not a monster, I want to protect people, therefore if it means killing, then so be it. When I take this into action then I doubt I will come out alive, so I just want to say: Good bye. I hope you enjoyed murdering my life and hope. Buck you. May Celestia have mercy on your soul and may you spend the rest of eternity rotting in hell. (In real life) The pony walks out of his cave and heads towards Canterlot. Ends with:

'No one cried when I cried.' ~ No Name

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