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MA Royal Pain: Part Two
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Sad
Tragedy
Sequel to "A Royal Pain", Twister must discover a new threat and stop it if he is to save his loved ones
Anthro
Alt. Universe
Celestia
OC
Other
Shining Armor
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Mosqueefo #1 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · · The Sun Goddess ·

First to comment :D

PressStart #2 · Mar 21st, 2014 · 1 · 1 · The Sun Goddess ·

Oh shit! One good story and two I hope it continues.

Death2205 #3 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · · The Sun Goddess ·

I like

PressStart #4 · Mar 26th, 2014 · 1 · 2 · Chapter Two: A Broken Heart ·

I don't care if you wrote it half asleep, loved the chapter. Luna slapping Celestia to knock some sense into her, that's my girl. Plus the Calvary is competing to the rescue. You did a good job and I look forward to the next chapter.

nodamnbrakes #5 · Apr 4th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

I don't care if you wrote it half asleep

This is called foreshadowing, children.

twisterwinds #6 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

4181613 lol, this is kinda my writers block story, and the next chapter I plain to be the last

PressStart #7 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

4181617 way to go Luna, that's why she's my favorite princess. Next chapter will be a Cryssalis beat down. Can't wait to read it.

Requiem17 #8 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

Chrysalis is boned.

twisterwinds #9 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

4182164 just a little.

PressStart #10 · Apr 7th, 2014 · 1 · 1 · Chapter Four: A Goddess's Wrath ·

Ohhhhh! Not only did Twister save my favorite princess, but he also became a alicorn. Yep this story shall stay in my favs.

Darthvader578 #11 · Apr 8th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter Five: The New Life ·

Please do a sequel!

twisterwinds #12 · Apr 8th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter Five: The New Life ·

4200167 i liked doing this one, I was thinking of doing a sequel

PressStart #13 · Apr 8th, 2014 · · · Chapter Five: The New Life ·

4200370 then do a sequel. I loved this story.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #14 · Apr 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter Five: The New Life ·

Why was this rated 'Mature'? This could have been 'Teen' and 'Sex'. Other than that, good story.

twisterwinds #15 · Apr 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter Five: The New Life ·

4207071 swearing, plus I was planning on writing clop for it, just don't feel comfortable to write it yet.

Historylover #16 · Nov 27th, 2018 · · · Chapter Three: On Th Run ·

It's amazing story from my p.o.v

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