A decent opening to this story, though I'll wait to vote on it till there's more of it.
Also I thought you were concentrating on Suitors, Consort, and Celestial Mother? Speaking of which, where is the chapter of Celestial Mother you were working on a week ago?

the ending seemed a little rushed but overall, good.

Uhm... is this anthro or not? I don't mind if it is but it's not exactly clear. Most of the time they are using their hooves but at least once it was mentioned that Twilight had fingers.

Sorry, Sorry but I need to say this:

"Luna shook her head, “but thou art there leader Twilight"
Should be
"Luna shook her head, “but thou art their leader Twilight"

This is the only kind of grammar mistake that annoys me, but i need to say it.

4096057 Let it be hooves... Let it be hooves!

Gait is how you walk, gate is a portal to an area.

And I only have one question really, why is it a good idea for Luna to save herself for someone who will save her and no one else? Realistically she's a goddess, and wouldn't need saving from about anything, and even if she did save herself for her saviour, what then after they died? Go cold turkey with sex until the next convenient kidnapping?

Awesome story

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shoot, I thought I removed everything like that.

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I confess, I kinda got caught up in this idea..........please don't hurt me!

You kind of got Luna's talking pattern wrong

I like these pairings with Twilight, but there is one thing that always bugs my head cannon, where the buck is Spike?

4107047 simple he had some royal business at the castle to take care of.....or he pass out next to the bed not hear thing....

Wow I've been reading to many slow build up stories, cause I was fully expecting at least five or six chapters before something like this happened. Right into the deep end though, I like it. Good reasoning too, though that just might be my inner adventurer talking.

This is great!