I don't know whether to think Loft Wing was brave or just plain stupid when he did the following:
Loft stood there for a long moment, and then stood to his full height, glaring at the princess as he spoke. “I am Loft Wing, direct descendant of High Commander Hurricane, and member of one of the most pure flocks in all of Equestria. We are a privileged few, held above all the rest so that we can defend those who can’t defend themselves, including you princess, so I don’t have to say a damn thing to you!"
To say that to the face of a being who can move celestial bodies, who's been around before his cherished ancestor, and is on the verge of going super nova induced by her rage pointed at you takes an astronomical amount of courage or stupidity.
This is my guess of what he had going through his mind while he said that: I'll show her my pride, conviction, and how important I am. She'll back down just like everyponyelse who's tried to stand up to me. .....Is that steam coming from her nose? OH CELESTIA MY LEGS JUST EXPLODED!
man we need a chapter about the hearing where the noble's say that twilight is should be forced into marriage whit blueblood and celestia get's see another part of the nobles where they all fantasize about rape twilight and the only reason she finds out is because of luna looking in their dreams
While you both have right to claim umbrage against Flash Sentry, our laws state that he must be held accountable for his actions before a court of his own pears, and must be alive to make it to that court date.
fucking amazing chapter next please it's good to see celestia went some stress on the high commander the way you made it
Oh they in deep shit
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I don't know whether to think Loft Wing was brave or just plain stupid when he did the following:
To say that to the face of a being who can move celestial bodies, who's been around before his cherished ancestor, and is on the verge of going super nova induced by her rage pointed at you takes an astronomical amount of courage or stupidity.
This is my guess of what he had going through his mind while he said that:
I'll show her my pride, conviction, and how important I am. She'll back down just like everyponyelse who's tried to stand up to me.
.....Is that steam coming from her nose? OH CELESTIA MY LEGS JUST EXPLODED!
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Oh Celestial sisters that was beautiful, well done sir.
At least it wasn't the 'chopping the wood' punishment.
Best typo ever!
Ahhhh only one mistake I caught in this is shining leaving with his"WIFE". Apparently the relationship wasn't known. Either way great story.
6470070 when will this be updated?
man we need a chapter about the hearing where the noble's say that twilight is should be forced into marriage whit blueblood and celestia get's see another part of the nobles where they all fantasize about rape twilight and the only reason she finds out is because of luna looking in their dreams
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oh, the nobles have their own piece of the vengeance pie coming, don't worry your little head.
6601770 nice
6601770 say how long is the next chapter goanna be
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It's being pieced together slowly, don't really have an ETA yet.
6602171 ok if you need any help just pm me and i'll try and help as best I can
6602171 ohh i cant wait for celestia to chew the nobles a new one
6602171 hey fuedra add rage behind the chapters the one's where where a lot of screaming is in so people can get popcorn for the show
good story hope for more,
cant wait for Celistia to find out that twilight and luna are togeather.....
6602171 good luck in write great story, I shall be wait for it to come out
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That Image has been finiky lately, I'll have to replace that page breaker.
Their suffering will be legend even in HELL
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I HOPE THEY PIE THE BASTARD!!!!