All of the LoLz

Also very long time since update sir i love you for not canceling this

Glad to see this story resumed
I had honestly, sadly, forgotten about it

As a sidenote: Some spelling checks would be nice before publishing...I can't say mine is great,heh, but a story is a different matter.

Keep up the good work.

“Uh huh, and my father always told me that stallions who said that are just puffed up stallion whores who are just looking for a quick lay, so why don't you do us both a favor and leave me alone ok.”

Hey, rhyming...
Nice...

It Lives, great chapter I would so love to see what Princess Celestia does to Flash and his gang

Can't wait for the next chapter

you know what i dont care i waited a year it was worth it to see flash get his balls busted by twilight and dash ....... and the n luna .......... and apparently celestia

oh hey plot twist you have overprotective celestia

what about over protective shining armor

also throw cadence in there for her love detection ability

oh plz dont be so long with this i dont mind waiting a moth for a chapter but a year is a bit much

Flutterdash and Twiluna in one story... Plus a good fun read = Insta fave and upvote. My two pony OTPs in one story has put a smile on my face, especially seeing flash get owned like that.

Please update faster now. I really want to see where this goes.

What about pets?

Scoots was so adorable I think my teeth have developed a few cavities.

So looking forward to what Tia is gonna do.

*cliks Fav and Track*

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YES, My life long dream of inducing a cuteness cavity has been achieved!
Glad you enjoyed it.

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I will admit, while Twilestia is more my cup of tea, Twiluna does have its perks, and their just so darn cute together.

And yeah, Flash will getting owned did make me giggle, even while writing it.

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Sad part is I didn't even intend that to happen.

6362234 Well its still an achievement...

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Oh Shining will be informed, as well as Cadance. Needless to say the next chapter will not be looking good for Flash and the majority of the Canterlot Flock.

Did it seriously HAVE to be Flash? It couldn't have been some random Pegasus?

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admit it was worth it unless your a flashlight person *shudder*

6362252 any estimate on next chapter nothing specific like a month or a year

6363026 As a matter of fact I am, I'm not saying that has to be the end-all ship, but it irritates me when some people put in a negative light for no reason other than "he's bland" or the that he's a "waifu stealer".

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I honestly hold no negativity toward the guy, but I prefer to use characters I am more familiar with in my stories then just random ponies, and Flash is a pony I am far more familiar with then a lot of other pegasi seen in the show...well besides Bulky Biceps.

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Hopefully sooner then a year, but with my home issues having taken a recent upswing lately, it may take a while, so best balpark is a month at the latest.

6363159 its nothing like that for me personaly i cant stand the guy

i think another story a twishy said it

the human flash and the pony flash a two different beings

just because twilight sorta liked human flash dosnt mean she is going to like pony flash

how does highschool popular kid translate to crystal empire guard

if they wanted it to work flash should have been a military brat

i could kinda stand twilight going to human world and dating flash (but i cant stand anthro or human pony storys just no its bad enough hasbro did it) but twilight dating pony flash No! He has had exactly 1 line in the show and thats when cadence spends time with twilight

you cant ship a character that has no character

6363221 cool look forward to it

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you cant ship a character that has no character

And yet that's what the fandom has done with characters like Button Mash, Thunderlane, and several other BG characters.

And what exactly ie wrong with just flat out giving him character? Again l, that's what the fandom's been doing even before the 100th episode aired, so why is Flash the sole exception?

6363297 your righe im sorry but i suppose he is the sole exception becasue hasbro tried to ship them and nobody i repeat nobody like to be told who should like who

I like your story but I definitely hope that the attempted rape on Twilight will result in Celestia giving the most harshest, cruelest, and brutal punishment. Remember, both Celestia and Luna are in short Gods that control the sun and moon, so they have a lot of power that they do not completely show to others unless angered/enraged. Furthermore, I honestly think that showing the brutality and harshest punishment towards rape, murder, and anyone that takes joy in inflicting pain on others do not deserve to get away. Either ways I hope that Twilight will also learn to fight to protect herself.

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Oh trust me, celly really cuts loose on them next chapter

YAY!!! FLUTTERDASH!

Yeeks, you seriously hated Flash when you wrote this chapter, haven't you?
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...and yet you actually didn't. Hard to call him familiar, though. Considering he have zero personality and little few seconds of screen time. Well, his character is easy to bend into anything due to that, I guess.