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This looks like a good story.
somehow i read that the title was "The mexican inside the colt"
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i this
You know, other than the protagonist ogling the girls and using profanities in Button's body, I don't understand how the story will be mature. Or will the guy grow up in Button's body before the mature content appear? I'm not criticizing the story, btw, as I think its pretty original. It's just that I don't see how the sex part is going to influence the story since the protagonist is trapped in the body of a preteen. If this commentary is offending, then I apologize. BTW, how often will this story update? I'm asking the last question due to your work in Butterscotch's story.
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For the mature content, a lot of sexual stuff is going to happen in the next few chapters. That and I prefer mature rating, since I can just write whatever I feel like without the constraint of the 'everyone' or 'teen'.
Both stories have different timeframes for me to write. You can be sure that one or the other will be out before Saturday or Sunday, unless I have something coming up.
I'll give a warning out at the end of each chapter, if I can't get the chapters out on time.
2 questions,1) Is Button's real(fan based) mind the little boy did it die and this guy take his place? 2) will this guy ever in the fic tell anyone the truth of who he is?
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Trying to answer your questions might end up spoiling the story for you.
Chapter 2 should enlighten you on some of the events that will transpire to the protagonist. Though I will not go right out and explain his entire situation in one go.
Just a warning, it's going to get a little weird in the next few chapters, but remember 'what kid wouldn't'.
4058533 fair enough though I think I would have been better off say "will these questions be answered in the fic"
It's Mrs Mash, not Ms Mash
The title got my hopes up and dashed them.
Hmm, nnnnnnnice!
I lost it at the first paragraph, damn, dis good!
But it also needs a porrfreading, it has many mistakes: if you need any, I'm willing to help you, Mr. Author!
I have a question though. When will you continue it?
-Zeph
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Should be out on the weekend.
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Do you need help with it?
I mean, I'm a seasoned pre/proof-reader, I want to help!
Even with fixing the first chapter~!
-Zeph
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Sure, but can you pm me on how to do this, cause I've never really done this before.
Again sorry about the errors, had to do this on my iPad, and with my computer up and running I should have the edited chapter 1 up soon.
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To the PM-obile!
(Oh GOD that was terrible! )
you know if button mash is actually successful at making magic usable for non unicorns wouldn't he become an alicorn as he would of invented a new kind of magic which is the same thing twilight managed.
A very pleasant story! Has everything!
Yeah... there's one problem there. As far as i can tell (mostly from fanart) Button is an earth pony!
4764967 well hell we know all the races have magic, it could be possible to change his magics flow to mimic that of a unicorn.
Or you know, we could just go with ITS MAGIC.
I like this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next to them all .
Awesome start
A very interesting start, but you could really use an editor.
I just started reading this, but im loving it.
I can't believe I am reading this again, what's that supposed to be like my 50th time. Yes it's that good. And still no updates
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