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Same question here. Mb its time for another rewrite?
Jesus Christ man, you cannot leave it at that, I'll have no fucking idea what's going on by the time you post the next chapter.
I'm confused as to the end of the chapter. I wonder what happened to Babs?
Im so confused right now dude
5130178 I would agree but so far its only the ending of this chapter that needs a re-write, I have no idea what the hell is going on.
Unless you plan on another chapter within a day or two, you should re-do this.
It's too confusing, and given the previous couple of chapters, leaves WAY too much unanswered.
The author will clear things up eventually. I just have to wait.
*years pass*
5130178 5130298 5130331 5130425 5130507 5130637 5130909 It's just a cliff hanger, people. It helps build suspense and mystery, as well as helps us get in the mindset of the protagonist, him being as confused as we are. It doesn't need a rewrite, but I do agree that a new chapter does need to be written soon or else the effect will be lost.
5130909 I know Right?
5131404 Why are you arguing with me if you are basically saying the same exact thing I did? All I said was that he needed to come out with a new chapter soon or else I would forget what happened this chapter.
5131404 oh if thats the case then the next couple of chapters are gonna be intense button banging babs, rainbow beating pinkie, twilight almost frying pinkie, and whatever fluttershy wants.
5132146 I agree
5131898 I'm not arguing, just saying have patience. Your comment, while not exactly rude, was rather demanding. Remember, writers on this site are typically not paid, and so they have no obligation to the reader.
I guess this was a slightly alternative episode to the whole clone thing that was going on with Pinkie Pie (the source of the shenanigans being sapient clone slime instead of a magic pool, kinda hope we get some kind of conclusion with it like Button blasting the stuff or something because I think you can do a little more with that stuff). The whole thing with Fluttershy seemed to be happening too fast though, by which I mean when Button just followed her "let's go" request with no explanation. Button seems to be pretty good at just letting most mares ask him to do things with no explanation beforehand. I wonder how Pinkie may deal with this whole episode? Will she decide to hang around Button more than her friends or maybe just take his side more often than the other girls. Also, how old is Button supposed to be again (by which I mean pony body, not human spirit)?
5131404 My comment was intended to be more of an attempt to bring attention to the fact that the last three or so chapters have had sudden, jarring shifts in situation, with next to no time for adjustment, leaving people with too many unanswered questions.
5132812 I understand. My comment wasn't meant to be accusing or condescending, simply requesting people to have a little patience. I agree that too many endings like this can get frustrating, though.
Great chapter
5130178 same for me to
How's the next chapter doing?
5214420
I just don't have the time. I'll see what I can do next week, but that's just hoping at this point.
This is a good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
the harem must be fed!
Update?
Update?