Twilight has a dream about her father telling her a story whenever she was a filly. Twilight wakes up and makes Spike write a note to princess Celestia... this dream is about Celestia being Twilight's mother...
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Rushed and too short
Whoa my jaw drop when I saw this.
I had a heart attack.
Good for a first.
Considering this is only your first its not too bad but you should of made it longer and made the time to make it make sense. its much too rushed.
Your story is good for a first. But, maybe you should stretch it out more it was a little to quick. Maybe you could have told us the back story on how Celestia gave her up and if it was easy or not or maybe she had second thoughts. Other than that the story is good. THUMBS UP!!
I thought that I rushed it too.