It took weeks for Rainbow Dash to finagle a date with Big Macintosh. But there's something that she couldn't shake when he was around. Why does he always act so distant? As she'll come to find out, he may have a good reason.
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where has this little beautiful peace of work been all my life...
I can't believe I like this story.
I am disgusted at myself for liking a story with the tags this story has.
Why do I like this story?
This is a very different story, and yet, its very well crafted, below and above the table.
Long few days ahead for them, I hope Mac doesn't combust.
6894784 That seems a little harsh.. I know not everyone likes her, but Zecora can fit in a story well enough if her rhymes flow properly.
Really, though, no reason to be disgusted or anything. You probably like the story because it is very well written. Characters are relatable, the dialogue is funny and charming. I chuckled at the wisecrack Mac made while they ate dinner.
They work well together.
This one is much better! I agree.
I read this story for both the story and the sex. Good story and I wish the chapters came out quicker. But RL takes priority.
Hopefully the weather board doesn't keep Dash too long so she can initiate her plan.
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Thanks
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Yeah, sometimes I wish people would see that I write other things besides WOC and maybe give it a shot, but oh well.
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Well then you'll be happy to know that I've already written nine thousand words on the next installment.
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which plan, exactly? Admittedly, the fact that I need to clarify really means that Dash thinks a little too much. Maybe I should cool it with all her planning.
6912858 You are very welcome. I'm glad I stopped by to read this one. I did thoroughly enjoy it.
6912862 The one involving the toy she got. It seems Mac doesn't know she has it yet.
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Oh, yes. I wasn't sure if you were referring to attempting to finish her work and leave Cloudsdale in a single day, rather than two. But the good news is, I recalled both things. Sometimes I forget things about my own stories, and I can't understand why that is.
Anyway, yeah. Things will happen with that, though seeing as how it's not written yet, I'm not totally sure how it'll end up.
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You magnificent mam you! So excited! Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm especially excited to see what happens when Dash shows Mac the toys she got. XD