Will Dawn wind up sleeping with the pony he has had a crush on, the fillyfooler, the musician, or the stunt pony? If only his love life was as simple as his existential crisis.
Damn, Dawn... you should have got her right there and then, as soon as the ropes were loose. Then, take her as many times, as gently or roughly as you want, until she either passed out from exhaustion or you finished yourself, which ever comes first.
soooooo, soarin thinks shes been cheating on him so that's why he left her, so when she is alone with dawn she immediately goes to sex instead of trying to talk to soarin more clearly about the situation? element of loyalty much
cute
oh and nice work on the self-editing
4738341 im about to one up you,
Hot
OH MY KINKY!!!!
Of course, knowing Dawn luck, something will go wrong when he wakes up.
4738604 He forgot to tell everyone he found Dash~
Damn, Dawn... you should have got her right there and then, as soon as the ropes were loose. Then, take her as many times, as gently or roughly as you want, until she either passed out from exhaustion or you finished yourself, which ever comes first.
Well, I didn't spot any errors in either one.
soooooo, soarin thinks shes been cheating on him so that's why he left her, so when she is alone with dawn she immediately goes to sex instead of trying to talk to soarin more clearly about the situation? element of loyalty much
Dawn is going to have a very bad case of blue balls.
It's not funny Dash. He's going to feel like you bucked him in the nuts.
Not cool Dash!
Wow, I think you did well on the self-editing part! Maybe it could use some spicing up here and there, but I think you did a good job overall.
4738912 no he realised he technically slept with dawn in dashs body which got her pregnant and then bolted out on her
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Yeah, he's gonna be sore as hell when he wakes up.
And her unborn foal. But if that is your fetish, who am I to judge?
You did a good job editing this chapter yourself. I was wondering if this chapter was another dream. I am ambivalent that it was not.
This was a nice chapter, here is a Rainbow Dash ahegao as a reward.
KBO.
So what's keeping the gel from making Dash go numb as well?
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Magic.
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This was my thoughts...
Mind readers
Everywhere.
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It seems like the foal was never even mentioned to him.
4744616 yes she said she told soarin that he got her pregnant and he found out dawn was in control of her at the time so he ran off on her
Kaidan. I love it. Great read before sleep.
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Oh, wow. That makes Soarin a total douche, not just a flake, then.
But I want to cum inside Rainbow Dash.....
4751744 Well I already did cum in Rainbow Dash
I loved it it had a lot of funny and sexy parts.I can't wait to see what happens next between them and what happens next to them .when they wake up.
Fantastic job my friend have been up all night reading this series can say its one of the best out there thanks for the amazing work
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Aww, thanks :D
Yeah the story is really popular, and I think I made some gems in the clop-bits since I actually wanted them to work with the story.
Heheheh, nice job mate, nice job
Loved it.