My life, dignity, and voice were all stolen from me, and these Equines think themselves my betters. I aim to prove them wrong. Social consequences be damned, I WILL HAVE MY PANTS!
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She's taking the "there's an alien who looks like an animal" thing really well.
Damn you, I needed to study today.
YES! NEW CHAPTER!!
And a nice one too^^
Well, this IS Equestria. Weird shit is par for the course and that is before you count stuff like Twilight spazzing out or Discord trolling the world for the lolz.
Needs to include the sex tag.
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Gonna have to agree, I'm pretty sure more weird shit happened during Discord's brief return than what you'd consider one intelligent alien of a human to be. I mean, he sorta literally warped the world, while Peter just sorta warps the perception of it.
Ha! This is bloddy brilliant so far. Def a favourite and a like. I´m really curious how this will continue.
Specialy since "Chucky" knows how to use a hatchet now and is still on the loose (reminds me of this one zombie movie where this filling station attendant zombie learned how to use weapons, overcome trenches and stuff).
Just hopping that ol` Pete here wont stumble into an human expo with stuffed humans.
Ooooh she got some!!
Great chapter, I'm really digging Planet of the Ponies stories.
But one little thing, " buy a stallion in gold armor", I know Durpy needs a good some pony but isn't that slavery?
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Whoopsie! My bad!
Fixing it now!
4157637 Whoops. I have no proof reader, so I may have little slips like that.
She dealt with the whole "this animal can communicate" thing pretty well. Didn't freak out, deny it or anything. Just went straight into apologising.
4157677 Dr. Zaius, Dr. Zaius...
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You can always blame her. I always do.
Will this be the only instance of "Clop" in this story? I personally prefer to stay away from "Clop-fics", no offense.
4160892 Clop may make a re-surfacing farther along, but will by NO means be a staple of this fic. This is a man who holds himself to higher standards than rutting everything that offers.
4161174 Thank you for the info. I shall stay away from the "Cloppy" bits, if you don't mind...
4161180 No problem. I shall have the clop clearly marked as well, so as to warn readers who want to avoid it before they get too deep...
Giggidy.
4161186 Yeah, been there, done that, bought the Brain Bleach...
Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
unconsciousness
Okay, this can technically remain as is, because apparently no one seems to know the difference and this is in dialogue, but, in case you don't know and it was a mistake, the word the vet was looking for is "sapient" not "sentient".
As for the clop; Down with clop! I only say this because this human will probably end up having sexual experiences with a bunch of different mares, and I would find such a man a disgusting example of humanity. Wow, you just can't keep it in your pants can you? Have some self-respect and common decency man! Not to mention such a scenario makes me disgusted in ponies just as much. People, regardless of the species, should be able to go more than an hour without thinking about fucking. If they couldn't, I doubt civilization would have ever have gotten out of the mud.
Maybe I'm just a prude.
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In response to the first one, oops. Trying to sound fancy and got caught.
To the second part, I do not plan on this being a regular thing. This isn't a story where the guy gets a harem of mares. I want to make Peter up to be a man with principles, but struggles as well. He has never had sex, and now there is a female of a sapient species literally throwing herself at him. He has never had a real relationship, but does want one. He had a moment of struggle, but overcame it.
As for the reflection on pony society, that is one of what I hope for this fic to address, the perceived issues with pony society, how Peter responds to it, and how ponies respond to Peters response.
Bit of advice: don't change the color of the text in future sexual situations. I don't read them, and that draws attention to them, making it very, very distracting.
4655650 Doesnt it just make it all the easier to scroll down untill its not on your screen?
The text after the clop is purple.
'Tis quite the conendrum indeed.
One must always remember in such a pinch: "You are all poeple."
Or as Captain Kirk would say: "When it's an alien, it's not bestiality." Quite befitting for both of them really.
4680306 Just remember! When it's purple colored, it's EEEEVIIL alright~ ?
... Not that I mind really.
4680306 Well, it's a bright color, and people tend to pay more attention to the bright colors than darker ones.
Hahahaah, ooooo that cloppy bit was very entertaining~
Props to Peter for not doing the smexy smoo.
Good work!
Good god why am I still awake?
Keep it up!
Neutered? Yeah... I'm suddenly a lot less confident about this story.
Forgot to capitalize How
seemed TO crossover
There ARE naked
heR whole body
thoughT of
just thoughT one
had borrowED some
Sorry, but I'm a stickler for these things and just couldn't keep quiet after the previous chapters. Good overall story, but these little typos can be distracting.
La gracia está en intentar permanecer oculto