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BassWaveEX

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OoooyVeeeeey
OoooyVeeeeey #1 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1: The Start ·
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EEEEEEEEWWWWWWW!!!!! V NECK!!!!

Perteks
Perteks #2 · Feb 26th, 2014 · · · Chapter 3: The Wedding: Part 1 ·
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I would scrap it all into one chapter, even probably next too. I don't know what to think about this. Its nothing interesting right now. Character have some kind 6 sense (I know it was obvious in show but for them it wasnt) what is totally ehh turn off for me.
Gonna give it chance anyway

Eclipse LunarSol
Eclipse LunarSol #3 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · · Chapter 4: The Wedding: Part 2 ·
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I don't think this will become a popular story honestly. OC stories rarely do...but I will give this a chance. :pinkiesad2:

Disorderly chaos
Disorderly chaos #4 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · · Chapter 4: The Wedding: Part 2 ·
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this is actually pretty good . Can you jsut put more details in the gore parts you now like were the blood splatters.

I sidestepped the diving changeling and grabbed its leg then slammed it into the ground. I then raised my foot and stomped it in the stomach, it spit up black blood in my face, and I loved the feeling of it. I grabbed its horn and ripped it straight off, then stabbed it right into its forehead and silenced it forever. I looked up and saw everybody staring at me, the looks of horror on their faces all just staring at me.

try this instead

I sidestepped the diving changeling and grabbed its leg then slammed it into the ground with a sickening crunch. I then raised my foot and stomped it in the stomach causing it to spit up black blood in my face, and I loved the feeling of it even giving in a lick with my tongue as it rain down my face."tastes like cherry's" . I then grabbed it by the horn and proceeded to give in a tug using my magic and while the thing was screaming in agony I couldn't help but laugh under my breath. After what felt like hours of pulling I finally was able to remove the horn with a crack, then spinning it around stabbed it right into its left eye causing more blood to come flying out and splashing on to me the black blood almost covering all of my fur. I looked up and saw everybody staring at me, the looks of horror on their faces all just staring at me.

SEE MORE BLOOD AND DESCRIPTION MAKES ANYTHING A LITTLE BETTER

The Batter
The Batter #5 · Mar 24th, 2014 · · · Chapter 5: Finding love ·
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Keep up the good work man I can tell this is going to be a great story

Scootareader
Scootareader #7 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 6: Revelation ·
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They start to have a very deep relationship

>mature
>gore
>NOT sex

What kind of two-bit romance is this? :twilightangry2:

^ That's a joke, by the way. :trixieshiftright:

BassWaveEX
BassWaveEX #8 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 6: Revelation ·
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4222933 Well I'm not really good at clop-fics or any sex related story, but what I am good at is gore! So much gore.:pinkiecrazy:

Scootareader
Scootareader #9 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 6: Revelation ·
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4222952
Romance without clop is like Dragonball Z without filler. :ajbemused:

BassWaveEX
BassWaveEX #10 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 6: Revelation ·
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4222958 Sorry pal, If you were looking for clop there are a bunch of other writers on this site that write stories like that, I'm just not one of them.

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