You fucker this is not an update to article 2

In a odd desire to randomly click the first interesting looking story in the new stories box, I have stumbled across this interesting and amusing gem. I didn't know weather to laugh or stare awkwardly at my screen as I read this, though that bar scene was priceless. Equal Opportunity indeed. I can only hope you finish this up, because though I don't like clop with no story, the lack of a real story is part of the charm here, and now I can't not read what happens next. Bravo and have a great day.

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She's a lady~

Only five years after the portal opened off the coast of Cuba.

That's... the most radomest place.

I want Gryphons smoking Cuban cigars and preaching about communism!

Well then that was a hell of a read kinda wanna see where this thing goes

I'll admit, I saw the username update and I was all

Then I saw it wasn't Article 2 and I went

Oh well, add to my read pile!

Welp, she's a keeper.

A rare straight Gilda story, rated Mature with sex tag and the sex is only implied? You should probably drop the rating to Teen to not get peoples hopes up dude. Straight Gilda stories are rare enough but straight clopfics with Gilda are as rare as uncorrupt politicians.

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Mods made me do it.
It was rated teen when i submitted it first.
They said change it.

I was going to get all butthurt about that being the ending, but then I went back and saw "Incomplete".
And boy, did I hear angels singing, let me tell you. I'll be favoriting to read further.

Well, this looks promising. Though your a tad bit of a trolly bastard to think that you could get away with describing such an intense, violent, and sensual scene while still having it rated teen. And having to change it to Mature without actually having legit clop is going to get a lot of people's hopes up. Especially with how well written this entire chapter, primarily the fight and... (not sure what to call that second scene) scenes are. It points to you potentially being very good at writing actual clop. Not saying that you have to, mind you, just making some observations and sharing my own thoughts.

Now then, please do continue. This is going to be good. Clop or no clop.

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You could call that second scene foreplay, I suppose.

heh, equal opportunity. that's a good one. also, the ball check "balls ...one...two."
now i'm all hot and bothered!

Always good to see a human/Ilda pairing. Or any straight Gilda pairing in general.
Though I can't help but feel that this would be better as a third person perspective story.

A nice short story. It's good to see 2nd person still getting attention.

I'd change it from Mature to Teen though, since there's much more implied than shown. Either way, nice work!

Yes! It's the human/griffon barfight that I've been waiting for!
The alley behind a bar totally counts.

And it even has angry fight sex. Sweet.

Muppetz knows what the people like.

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The mods told him to post as mature, they deemed it adult enough content to need it.

Well..., that's one way to pick up a chick!

This story pleases me, another!

I think I'll read this later.

3698345 Yah, that's a good word to use.

This guy must be pretty clumsy, he fell down some stairs and now he's going to going down a few more flights.

Mmm...rough sexy times.

More please.

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You sir got my fav and watch.
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I want Gryphons smoking Cuban cigars and preaching about communism!

I would like to see that too.

I am now imagining you sitting all flustered in your room, under your american flag, typing away at this

Is this what you do with your time now?
You need to go out less.

I like where this is going.
RRRRowl!

Not typically up for a second person story but I did make the chapter. This would be an interesting world to build upon some more and while I would like to see it, I can't really deal with the 'you' stuff any further.

Have a thumbs up and keep on writing. (Hoping to see at least one more Article 2 update )

I... I actually drooled...

My friends... thats warrior lust for you.
I'm pleased.
If there will ever be more... I'm all fire and flame for it!

That's amazing I didn't think I would see another human kissing Gilda fic and especially so fast. I liked it so much that I might want to read that part again. Also very nice job with her wings and tail.

i am aroused. Bravo Mr. Author Guy, Bravo.
If you're ever inclined to continue this story... I am likely to tell you Bravo once or twice more.

i enjoyed this hopefully more in the pipe

This has the beginnings of an excellent series. I really like how you made a world where ponies and humans are not automatically antagonists but equals. Bravo!

rough drunk sex is best sex!

Man. This is pretty good.