Enormous Boom is a unicorn living in Manehatten, spends her days redesigning album artwork and her weekends partying with her best friend. Not the best, but it couldn't get much better than it is, could it?
Enormous Boom is a unicorn living in Manehatten, spends her days redesigning album artwork and her weekends partying with her best friend. Not the best, but it couldn't get much better than it is, could it?
Pacing could really use some work, you tried to jam too many ideas in too quickly and it shows. Try spreading things out a little more next time.
3656253 Thank you. I'm still rather new at publishing my writing, so tips are very helpful.