It has been a year since Twilight has became a princess and to celebrate she invites her friends to canterlot. This put's stress on one unicorn
It has been a year since Twilight has became a princess and to celebrate she invites her friends to canterlot. This put's stress on one unicorn
You wrote quiet as quite through most of it, there were some other misspellings and a few of your sentences need some grammatical corrections. Other than that I think that this is a good story. This also seems finished but you have it listed as incomplete, just thought you should know.
3531146Thanks for your feedback
I'll see if I can do something about that :)
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