Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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Woah. Just a few minutes ago I checked your profile to see how many words you've already written and when we can expect new chapter I feel like a good fangirl.
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Thank you so much!
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Thanks for reminding me! I just re-updated it.
All my reactions to this chapter.
Jesus, the hit's just keep on coming... sometimes literally! Though, I wonder why Applejack is so upset over him being bi. I mean, he never really lied about it, because she never asked. Please tell me you're not going with the "homophobic redneck" headcanon...
Awesome work Sue. Must have had a bloody brainstorm on that vacae. Ooohh, this plot is getting hairier than an ungroomed Shetland.
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Oh, no. She mentioned in an earlier chapter that she didn't have a problem with gay ponies, and (I hope!) I've tried to present her as more open-minded about other things (i.e., telling Mac not to use 'jackass' because it's offensive). But I've found people can be surprisingly accepting of one thing, and then be really, really head-up-the-ass about another.
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Heh, very true. Sorry for the gut reaction. Being a Southerner myself, that trope always irked me.
Fantastic chapter! I hope AJ doesn't destroy the photos, she should keep them. You know, for science.
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That hospital may need to soon start housing a volatile crowd. The receptionist was getting that vibe and Connie better be expecting to stay in one of those beds after Applejack learns of the stunt she pulled on Applebloom. You are making me hate and love all the characters because I can guess what Connie told Flim and why he cannot be the one to tell Flam. They are truly brothers. I might be wrong on the specifics, but given all the information so far, the general event looks pretty obvious to me.
You are an amazing writer.
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I almost had the same reaction, but then I remembered that at one time, I would have had the same, knee-jerk reaction. Stereotypes are stereotypes for a reason and everyone can't know everyone else. I have faith that Applejack will work through this.
You, uh, know it's spelled 'snicker', not 'snigger', right?
I can tell this is going to be one bitch of a time trying to have Flim and Flam suss out how their mom could possibly be alive.
...fuck...
I could of sworn AJ had experimented with Dash in this story, she has no room to complain about this. Flim keeping it private is his business.
Also, drama senses tingled, I think I know what happened to Flim and Flam's mother. Will wait expectantly.
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Actually, IIRC, 'snigger' is a different word, a more nasal laugh than a snicker. (Sorry for the brief reply; my Net is out and I'm trying to access FF on my phone! I'll be more coherent later).
DUN DUUUN DUUUUUUUN!
holy shit what a twist! also 3$ says he will be getting more stitches in the next chapter from the ass whopping AJ will be giving him.
Calling it now: Connie is the mother of the twins by way of abuse
That was an unexpected turn of events. Oh, and Flam, don't ask for the nurse re-stich your brother yet. Wait untill Applejack finishes with him.
Can't wait for the next installments
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I was gonna say that :(
Not sure how I feel about Connie here, she never really grew out of being a bully, but she clearly loves them both in her own twisted way. Not sure what I am looking forward to more, Connie and Applejack ganging up on Trixie, or Trixie and Applejack ganging up in Connie. I am really glad to here that Flim is glad that his brother and Trixie are back together.
That scene with the Great and Powerful Trixie was hilarious.
For half the chapter I thought the big reveal was going to be that Connie actually was their mother. This reveal is even bigger, but I'm missing why Flim feels like he can't tell Flam. It's not going to turn out that their mother became a failed ballerina who married an earth pony pedaphile, is it? I'm more confused than ever on Connie's motives now. She's come to Ponyville in part to convince Flim to abandon the baby, even though she knows just how terrible an act that is more than anyone, and the terrible struggles of being a single mom. Does she really have zero empathy?
I love this chapter it had my feelings everywhere.this story just gets better and better.first I hope Flim and Applejack will get over him being bi and they can get through it .second I hope Connie will be ok and all three can get closer and we can find out what really happened to there mom and they can forgive her.I can't wait to see what happens between them all and to them all next.this storm is far from over I feel it's just getting started.I can't wait to see what happens.
One minute, you make us laugh our asses off, and then we bawl our eyes out! Susie, are you distantly related to the Devil?
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Ha! Why would any of those three team up, though? They hate each other!
Well, he was so shaken by it that he doesn't (yet) want to put Flam through the same thing. This will come up later.
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WHAAAAAAAT oh my god, that's twisted! If this were set in a different 'verse, I might have actually run with that! But, no. They're not related.
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"Distantly"? ;P
5642805 I don't think Connie hates Applejack, actually, she just slots AJ into that general disdain Connie has for all Equinity. I could totally see them constantly bickering and trading off who they go after, based on who has pissed each other off the most recently, like a catfight version of Eurasia, Eastasia and Oceania.
As for why I suspected Flam was inadvertently in an incestous relationship with Trixie? Well...
I thought it was foreshadowing!
5633706 "Oh, you say that, too."
Damn. Just, damn, Susie. All three siblings at the hospital, one beat half to death, this bombshell potentially about to drop on something that has darkened Flam's soul for so long... and Applejack is on her way there, fucking livid.
Hoping none of this negatively affects the foal.
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Maybe I'm just being clueless, but what did you mean by that?