Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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I read that and totally lost it.
Also, poor Soarin'...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Churchill
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That's one of them!
This isn't looking like you're doing the right thing, Flim!
(side note, the *** for scene breaks is a bit easy to miss. [br] I believe is the code to make a line. Works better ^^)
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Whoops! Thanks for the tip.
Damn, poor berry, she is gonna start drinking again isnt she?
Great chapter. I laughed quite a lot.
well then.
that was fucking amazing. just amazing. The dinner scene was wonderfully paced. I liked the subtleness concerning Flim's mannerisms at the table. I wonder if him not being religious will become important. kinda random, but shouldn't Flim have like massive bruising from the kicks delivered courtesy Applejack and Big Mac, or does bruising only apply when he externally bleeds in this story? I'm sorry, it's just a random little thing I noticed. Anywho, you kept the story moving at a wonderful rate, kept it fresh, introduced new bits of information and even a bit character growth (maybe). I think this could be renamed Bombshell: The Chapter cuz wow did we learn a lot here. Like holy fuck Flim you're an asshole, how the hell did you manage to ruin your own brothers wedding? an even better question, why does he still hang out with you? Oh yeah, then we find out that they're literally sons of a whore, then, oh god I'm totally not internally crying, we find out their mom is dead and Mac sympathizes with him, that scene could not be any more beautiful in my head. There's sand in my eye, and not only from the emotional parts. I lost it when Applebloom basically called Flim the 'ugly twin', I couldn't breathe when AJ called Flim a necrophiliac (especially after they finished talking about dead ponies). also Flim's interactions with Applebloom are just adorable, he's so good to her, damn he's really good with kids and doesn't even talk down to her, is there something you're trying to tell us? I can't seem to grasp just what he's trying to do though, it's kinda ambiguous, he's obviously being a pretty good sport about having to sit down to dinner and heck he's the one trying to get everyone to talk a bit more, he has a little moment where they all realize they're not that different from each other, but idk he's been a very entertaining character thus far. I wonder how Applebloom's feeling now; she barely knew her mom either. Do you go with the headcanon that her mom died during childbirth?
also brain bleach; so you can be funny too Flam, that's nice to see. Dick Dastardly up to no good huh, gee how'd he manage to slip 3 freaking pills into Mac?
Sorry for rambling, the longer a chapter is the more I ramble
Churchill and Lady Astor for the tea (cider) poisoning. I love that exchange! I know Churchill also said the "I'm drunk but you're ugly, and tomorrow I'll be sober" in "Two Step".
No idea on any other quote. (frustrated) I really wanted a cookie too...javascript:smilie('');
I loved the baby naming line of AJ. (if it's gas, I'll name it after you.) Brilliant! Literal LOL! (Was that the other famous quote?)
Didn't AJ get pregnant belly too quickly? Seriously, this bugs me.javascript:smilie('');
I still really want to hate this AJ and Flim ship.
You still write too DAMN WELL to allow me. (sigh) I suspect I'm going to learn to like it. javascript:smilie('');
The "If it's gas, I'll name it after you." Quote is from here: i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/7881254912/hE15703F9/
Holy shit. Not a single lie, this was the funniest chapter of a fanfic I've ever read. Amazing.
3446503 I don't want to start a disagreement or anything, take what I say with a grain of salt: I loathe Soarin' and Rainbow Dash as a ship. There's just no backing to it except that she has a fan girl crush on him, which I don't count as legitimate feelings. I don't hate people who ship them though ^^ to each his own after all
I myself like to ship Soarin' with Spitfire.
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Bravo! I thought no-one would get that, but you proved me wrong! Have all the cookies!
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Wow! Your comments always make my day
That'll be briefly mentioned in the next chapter. Keep in mind bruising takes awhile to show up.
Heh, that comes up later, too. Basically, they're so close and have been through so much together that they can forgive even the worst mistakes, but that'll be explored in detail later.
I'm so far trying to leave it ambiguous, but I might touch on it later if I change my mind.
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She's more heavily pregnant in the cover illustration than she is at this point in the story. Although it's never said exactly, there are hints in the story (and in upcoming chapters) about how far in the pregnancy she is. I don't know much about equine anatomy, but I figure that even an early baby bump would show on a pony as slim and toned as AJ.
Welcome to the Dark Side!
3445307 There isn't anything in the canon show that shows if they know each other or not. That's what HEADcanon is for.
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Make someone happier: check!
Oooh fun. Ah alright, hmm my family must be weird then; our bruises show up pretty soon after we hurt ourselves. but then again that's probably cuz we get injured pretty hard. Hehe, for some reason I thought it would look like he got them from a very intimate and aggressive lap dancer, but then I realized those bruises would be a lot higher up yeah, I'm too stupid to live sometimes
All the foreshadowing, I love it! But d'aw that's really sweet, hits me right in the feels. I cannot express how much I love all the intricate detail you put into this story, you make everyone so three dimensional and interesting. Heck even Flam gets some dimension. considering the themes in this story, I'm wondering if my thought of Flam being a virgin is still relevant... I'll wait and see, I know whatever you write will be amazing.
Ok then, fair enough. Ambiguity, don't 'cha just love all that gray.
(Sorry for being nosy) when a mare is pregnant their stomach doesn't really distend towards the ground, it does a little, but they mostly get bigger on the sides.and they're gestation period isn't a full year, its just 360 days. A lot of horse owners love saying this to people who generalize
3448108 Mwahaha
All the cookies! i3.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/006/199/x-all-the-y.png
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Can't wait to read more!
Something tells me that Flam will cause this sort of scene when he learns the location of his brother, but not the details:
how about them apples.
What?
What?!
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Hr
That, right there, means these two will be a perfect couple.
Another great chapter, though I have to scratch my head a bit at Soarin's portrayal. I never seen him done up to be such an idiot before.
Bah, still, this is shaping up to be a very cute romance, mixed with some well done drama, AND we get some juicy clop next chapter! Any idea when that will be?
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Sorry about how he was portrayed! I had fun with it, but I knew some folks wouldn't be happy.
It's 95% done, and will be up ASAP!
Okay, I can see the whole conversation at the dinner table happening while they are eating. So Flim is a decent character, and maybe Soarin WASN'T the one with Flim that night?
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That's the quote by Winston Churchill.
3449115 I actually agree with this.
Reminds me of these two...
Luigi is underrated!
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it's 'hr' in brackets =D (horizontal rule)
I love this story so far as well as the pairing. It's nice to see Flim, not as a greedy antagonist, but as a smart-mouthed yet caring guy. So yeah, it's good to see him portrayed slightly different from how he's usually written.
I loved it all I said it once and I'll say it again just keeps getting better and better .I can't wait to see what happens next to them this is going to be awesome beyond awesome
I must point out a very important error. Something That pops up in an uncomfortably large number of stories. YOU DO NOT NEED TO WAIT 24 HOURS BEFORE REPORTING SOMEBODY MISSING!!!
This is an urban legend and a very dangerous one. This isn't your fault, it is Hollywood's. People have died by this false belief.
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What?! Hollywood lied to me?!
Bullcrap Identical twins aren't genetic, both my grandfather AND my great-grandfather were identical twins.
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That doesn't necessarily mean its genetic.