Steve: Through the portal.

by Writing Reaper

A new day. (Re-posted.)

A NEW DAY.

(This chapter(And story!) is going to be in 1st person, just the hands up.)
"Hey get up!"
As I slowly open my eyes I see a cyan rainbow maned pony. I stare blankly for a little while and then my brain reboots.
"Oh, hey Rainbow Dash." I yawn. "Why did you wake me up? I was sleeping like a baby." I chuckle.
"Well... Twilight wanted you and me to come to her place. I asked her why and she said it was important." Rainbow Dash replies.
"Ok." I say.
"Before we go, put on some clothes, boxer boy." Rainbowdash smirks.
Oh god. What does she mean by that? I think. I have clothes on, right? Why would she care anyway? I look down and scream, covering myself. "What did you do with my clothes?" When I look up, I see that Rainbow Dash is wearing a waist high tank top that reveals her belly button- and her thin belly... No brain! I scream to myself. NO!I I can't look away though. I continue to stare and see that she is wearing tight black shorts. So se- No! Your not allowed to think that brain! I continue to yell at myself. I'm getting mesmerized but why? She isn't even a human but yet... I throw personal caution to the wind: Shes so SEXY! I think.
"Well it's on the the table." Rainbow Dash frowns at me. I throw myself back to reality and realize I'm blushing like a bandicoot on a hot summers day.
I look at my clothes lying on the table and put them on as fast as possible. "Ok, you ready?" Rainbow Dash asks
"Yes I'm ready." I confirm.
We walked out of the front door and she takes my arm and flies down to the ground. We land and begin to head towards the tree house. We are not far from it.
"Did she say anything about this important thing?" I ask as we walk.
"No, now that I remember, I left a few things out." She blushes. "Sorry.
"It's ok." I say.
We get to the treehouse and we enter. What I see makes me narrow my eyes in both fear and rage. What the fuck is he doing here?
"You." I say, filling each word with hate.
"Oh hey, Steve how you been?" He asks.
"Good... Anyways, Herobrine, what happened to you? Waiting for the melons to grow?" I say cynically.
"Well... You were gone for a week so I put on some diamond armor and got a diamond sword, potions for health and some other stuff." Herobrine answered, shrugging casually.
"Anyways you seem to be getting along well. He says you're his brother- is that true?" Twilight asks.
"Yeah he's my twin brother. Our only difference is the eyes." I answer.
"What's wrong with his eyes?" Rainbow Dash asks curiously.
"Well..." Herobrine says taking out his contacts, "This is what my eyes look like." His eyes were white and glowing.i After about a minute he put his contacts back in and the glowing stopped. "I was born with white glowing eyes," he said sadly. "I learnt from villagers in my world that we can make things known as contacts. It took me a long time but I made some that made it look like I have real eyes. They are fake though," He explains.
"Oh..." Rainbow Dash says sadly.
We sat for about a minute in silence until Twilight spoke up.
"Well... Anyways," She says, breaking the silence. "I told the princesses about you, Steve and they want you to go to Canterlot."
"Uh ok, but can my brother come?" I ask.
"Of course! He's your brother and the princesses would want to see any new species that came to this world."
"Oh cool!" Herobrine said.
"So when do we leave?" I ask.
"Right now!" Twilight says.
"Ok." I say.
Rainbow dash brings me back to her place to get ready. I freshen up a bit and wait outside for Rainbow Dash. Left alone, I had time left to think. Ok... So my brother is also in this world which is awesome and I'm finding Rainbow dash really sexy. But why am I finding her so hot?
"Why is she so sexy." I say quietly.
"Who sexy?"
I look up to find Rainbow dash with a curious grin on her face. Oh shit.
"Oh uh... It's nothing." I laugh nervously. "I just get my words mixed up sometimes, you see?" I get a feeling she is doing this for her own enjoyment.
"You're such a bad liar." She giggles. "By the way I know who you're talking about. Are you saying I'm sexy?" Fuck she's good.
"No uh... You're fine. I mean it's just..." My face is so red. "Uh... I'm just going to shut up now."
"Well I guess I'm going take that as a yes. Anyways, I'm ready." She says, a big cheesy grin plastered across her face.
"Ok." Fuck she knows, I think, blushing.
"By the way don't have the door smack your ass on the way out." She says with a smile on her face.
"I'll make sure of that." I reply sheepishly.
We both go outside. She puts her arms under my arm pits and flies me down and we land shortly afterwards. We both walk in silence but I occasionally hear her giggle, probably thinking about the whole thing at her house. We finally arrive at Twilights house and I knock on the door. It opens and Spike tells me to come in.
"Hey girls. I want to tell you something in private," Rainbow dash says. UH OH, I think, beginning to panic. They were already in another room...
"What was that all about?" Herobrine asks.
"Trust me- you don't want to know." I reply
"Okay." Herobrine says. He sounds a little disappointed.
They come back in.
"WowIcan'tbelieveyouhaveacrushonRainbowdash!" Pinkie Pie says.
"What did you say?" Herobrine said.
"It was No-nothing dude." I say giving them the hint to drop it. "Anyways, are we ready to go now?"
"Yes we are." Twilight says.
"Then let's go." I sigh.

Comments

[dukesofhazzardftw]

First!

[Writing Reaper]

3432643 lol

[dukesofhazzardftw]

3432654Lolol

[Writing Reaper]

3469568 *shivering* I don't know.

[Writing Reaper]

3469617 she might of check out his um private areas...?

[Writing Reaper]

3471031 probably no... I don't read much 'clopfics'.

[Writing Reaper]

3540548 Yeah it's really rushed. I have been thinking about not continuing the story, as it was rushed and just it's too flawed. I did not write it as good as it should of been, and I did not explain things as good and I also rushed romance too much. But I have a new story it's called 'New Life, Old War' I highly recommend reading it.

[Writing Reaper]

3542315 Also, I have got better at writing, planning and details on stories. I'm writing a story right now that's has, almost no rushing, high amounts of detail and smoothly wrote. so I think I did good...

[dukesofhazzardftw]

Please continue man.

[Writing Reaper]

4330466 Sorry, but no. I can't, it just wasn't that good. I did have little hope and that's all fine and good but if the story isn't good it's not worth working on, for me anyways.

[dukesofhazzardftw]

5356361 It was and IS really fuckin' awesome! Seriously! Please!

[dukesofhazzardftw]

All pf your other stories are HITS!!! You just have to continue on that kinda path to make this one even better!!

[Writing Reaper]

5357743 I've lost my interest in it, sorry but I will not. Also, read my latest blog post I explain some important.

[Writing Reaper]

5357748 Read the comment below.

[dukesofhazzardftw]

Please don't leave us....
please continue....

[Writing Reaper]

5360181 Sorry dude. But I want to become a game developer and that takes a lot of time.

[dukesofhazzardftw]

5362899 well do this story in your free time!! PLEASE I'm begging you!!!

[Writing Reaper]

5364957 Look I'm done working on the story for a lot of reason other than rewriting it. I'm moving on, I found so many other joys than writing, I'm working to develop games and that's something I chose to do. I'm not moving away from the community I'm just focused on so many other things. I don't want to work on the story or any of them for that matter, I lost interest in a lot of my work and that includes this one. So I'm letting go of them, and I'm not changing that. Please come up with a good well thought out comment for me to read OVER PM, this isn't a conversation to have on this story page for the fact that it isn't relative to the story.