When the city of Hoofgen is attacked by a dragon, creatures long said to be extinct, Fluttershy, part of a trio of prisoners ends up in Whiterun. From there, she not only finds out who she is destined to become but also embarks on a series of epic quests to conquer her fear of dragons and defeat Alduin, king of the dragons.
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If it were me, I would have had the earth ponies be the empire, and the unicorns take the place of the Thalmor. But that's just me.
3415813 I made the Unimor or Maremor, I forgot which, as mainly Unicorns with them being Altermarei Dominion. The Empire is a mix.
Hmm, interesting. Could have been done better; might do something like this myself. Keep up the good work.
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Earth ponies make more sense for the Stormcloans, considering that they're hardy and strong. I would personally write it as an anthro fic.. o3o
Unicorns would probably be mainly Thalmor, yes, but when I think of the empire I would say a mix of unicorn-Pegasai.
3416042 I was originally going to do it with more description and have it follow the first scenes of skyrim quite closely but it failed moderation so I kind of rushed a little more.
How do you think it could be improved? 
3416050 forgot about the Thalmor...
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More description and better-flowing, more natural dialogue. You may also need an editor, which I would be happy to help with; I enjoy being an editor/prereader. Perhaps it could even become a collaborative effort.
Character choice could have been done better I suppose. I can PM you with more ideas.
3424178 You should have seen the original wagon scene.
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Lol. Idk if I want to... ~hides~
Good... Could have been done better. Felt a bit stilted. But still, it worked okay.