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Paintings of A Lifetime

DoodleWing, a natural painter at birth is sent to Celestia, as she discovers that his talent is outstanding, she sends him to Ponyville, Cloudsdale and Canterlot to paint 5 paintings of each landscape.
On DoodleWing's journey he comes across an old friend he once knew, before moving to Fillydelphia.

All rights go to their respectful owners, I own nothing except my OC DoodleWing.

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Stalin the Stallion

Stalin the Stallion #1 · Mar 9th, 2012 · · · Paintings of A Lifetime Chapter 1 ·

Many spelling errors ect. Stalin dont want Grammar Nazi to get you, so Stalin recommends to seek for proofreader. Style is not bad, but it need to have a little bit more descriptions. Find a proofreader and continue writing. Good luck!

Stalin commands to dance!

DashWithRainbows

DashWithRainbows #2 · Mar 9th, 2012 · · · Paintings of A Lifetime Chapter 1 ·

this story is looking good, I'd like to see were you take it so I'm going to track this.

DoodleWing

DoodleWing #3 · Mar 9th, 2012 · · · Paintings of A Lifetime Chapter 1 ·

305154 Thanks for the feedback!
I know my spelling is horrible
But I'll take your advice and get a proofreader,

Thanks once again!

DoodleWing

DoodleWing #4 · Mar 9th, 2012 · · · Paintings of A Lifetime Chapter 1 ·

305258 Thanks for the Feedback!
Im glad your tracking this! I will be writing the next chapter sometime in the future.
Just gotta make sure people like it first
Thanks once again! :D