• Published 8th Sep 2013
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For Ever Free - Ninja Cookies



When Tia and Lu Lu are playing Hide n' seek, they get an un expected visitor... or should I say un expected, crush...

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Diamonds, diamonds everywhere

Looking all around Luna struggled away from Discord’s grip. Glaring from left to right the diamonds it showed her reflection. All of them where bewildered, how in any time did all these get down here? Or how didn’t they even know about it? Tia was the first to speak about this, as she spoke her wings opened and she used her magic she gave some light for all of them to see around themselves. Looking down the cave she simply said “it looks like it goes down for miles” glaring back at Discord and Luna she started to walk. Wanting to see what was down there, Tia had a determent face on. Discord and Luna quickly followed the white alicorn. Looking from left to right Discord admired his reflection in the diamonds, passing them.

It felt like forever but soon the three made it to the end of the cave. Looking up there where six diamonds, one blue, one orange, purple, red, and two pink. They were placed in the large shape of a diamond. The small group fell silent; Discord was the first to walk up. Looking at his reflection Discord put out his lion paw right before he touched it Discord felt a burning sensation on the pad of his paw. Quickly pulling it away the Draconequus looked shocked at the diamonds. Tia arched an eyebrow at her friend. Getting a little nervous Luna said to her sister

“Can we go?” the little blue alicorn asked. Tia nodded at her younger sister looking down at her. Looking back at Discord she simply said

“Let’s go” Discord didn’t turn around but all he said was

“You guys go….I’ll catch up” still staring at the diamonds he was still in shock. Tia nodded and used her magic to light the way Luna and her where going. Looking back Discord had waited until Tia’s light was gone, using his magic Discord levitated the six diamonds, in a snap of his eagle claw a small pouch appeared, putting the six diamonds in Discord closed the pouch up and followed after Tia and Luna. Finally catching up to the two ponies Discord smiled as he hovered above them. Tia replied with a small smile, she was getting a little bit of a bad feeling of Discord. After all his name really does mean ‘chaos’…

||Chapter 4||
||created by: Ninja Cookies||
||Story by: ninja cookies||
||Anything else: sorry this was very short...||

Comments ( 5 )

Short chapter, but it's looking interesting.

By the way, will there be a fight scene soon?

3985844 I know it's short... and yes there will be a fight scene c: :pinkiehappy:

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All right! By the way, have you seen my new "Eighth Sea" story yet? If not, do you mind checking it out?

3985890 haven't read it c: I'll check it out after I eat. I'm about to just die of hunger XD :pinkiehappy:

6051183 yeaaaahh. This was written a long time ago. So... I have gotten much better with my writing. Speaking of my writing, I'm not going to be posting anymore mlp fanfictions as I have moved past that. But you can see my much better artwork at: ask-starlight-glimmer.tumblr.com

Oh, and I write on Wattpad now :)
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