Fluttershy has been feeding the animals based on generosity of others. When the cost of feeding them increases and her inability to beg for help she decides to take a job as a phone sex operator.
3156969 That is the million dollar question now isn't it. I want someone to guess who it is. Winner gets a possible request fic or a chance to appear in the sequel as an OC or nothing!
3156974 Sorry man it was either the Feels Canon TM* or the Cliff Hanger... I chose cliff hanger since the next chapter might have a possible overload of Feels or Lawls...
3157006 Nah ... nah... maybe... but nah. Though I can't guarantee the Sequel will be out anytime soon and also I can't spoil what the sequel is about all I can hint is that Candy Clit makes a return not as a phone sex operator or as a main character, excited yet?
Actually this may not be accurate at all... I will decide if she makes a return since technically well it's only....
every time this updates i dont see it until a point were i have to hide out at work to read it......whitch actually is fine with me cause fuck work when there is awesome to read. and thats right twily, luna destroyed your shit then bailed like a fucking boss. thats what you get for crushing on that bitch tia. tyrant with a foot fetish. man i love this story.
3157363 not only does this chapter cement the idea of mine since episode one that flutters has a total fuck me voice but also that i would willingly let luna go all futawesome on me. i dont think i needed to know that last bit but fuck. there it is. good job Diablo.
3157389 I will give you a clue one of those answers is right but I want the specific one. If you can't guess with just one answer and you only have two more tries to guess you won't win the big fabulous prize of most certainly NOTHING!
3157469 Brian is an enigma he/she/it could be a male or female the question is does that really help you? Because if it is only males there are still 8 lead male characters in mlp.
3157480 If I tell you I will be a nerd on this site. So pm me that question because I don't want anyone to know it came from World of Warcraft and it was the name of my paladin.
3157571 Alright, I present you with my answer... King Sombra. He was not only a shadow in his first appearance, but his mane flows just like the Princess's, his is black like a shadow.
So I just got a PM won't say from who claiming supposedly my followers write my stories... let me make something absolutely clear.
I don't let other ponies/people, write stories for me and then post them as my own. I have not and will not leave anypony non-credited for any ideas, edits, proof read, etc. I have even told some followers to write their own story and one of them has on his own profile and I have not been credited for his work because it's his own.
So if you hear rumors from anypony at all that I didn't write my own stories let me know because one thing about any of my stories whether they suck or rock is they are all my own. Prompts and ideas if I had some inspiration I credit them. Just look at the cover it hasn't changed about my inspiration it's been there in black and white.
Fluttershy has never been a bitch before? I would suggest you watch the Dragon Quest episode and the Putting your hoof down episode.
I think you will find Fluttershy can be mean if need be or not as kind or timid. Sure she is over all shy but like she said she can't perform in crowds. She isn't in a crowd she is at her house anonymous like during the MMDW episode.
Try again good sir.
As for it not being your cup of tea that's fine this story won't please everyone.
As to it being rushed. I didn't want the staleness to hit as you pointed out with the wash rinse repeat.
3160453 Yeah apparently some people don't see the comedy tag and think "ooh a piece of candy." So when they find out not much sex going on or in depth sex they go ... "where is the beef?"
There you go enjoy it... this chapter I tossed everything at you in hopes to sate you until the finale... that will be... EPIC! or not...
All I got to say is that it is their own faults. Shy was just doing her job. It was their choice to call her and must deal with the fallout.
This is too suspenseful. WHO IS CANDY CLIT??! WILL WE EVER FIND OUT?!?!
3156939 Yeah but isn't easier to not take responsibility?
WHO IS BRIAN SHADOW?!! TELL ME NOW!!!
No... it didn't sate me cause of the CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great stuff though.
3156969 That is the million dollar question now isn't it. I want someone to guess who it is. Winner gets a possible request fic or a chance to appear in the sequel as an OC or nothing!
3156974 Sorry man it was either the Feels Canon TM* or the Cliff Hanger... I chose cliff hanger since the next chapter might have a possible overload of Feels or Lawls...
3156948 Next chapter my friends you will see the ultimate ending to the ultimate story of ultimate laughter... and fun stuff too.
3156986 Alright, but I'll be waiting
eagerly anticipating
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Hope it doesn't take 23 days.
3157006 Nah ... nah... maybe... but nah. Though I can't guarantee the Sequel will be out anytime soon and also I can't spoil what the sequel is about all I can hint is that Candy Clit makes a return not as a phone sex operator or as a main character, excited yet?
Actually this may not be accurate at all... I will decide if she makes a return since technically well it's only....
every time this updates i dont see it until a point were i have to hide out at work to read it......whitch actually is fine with me cause fuck work when there is awesome to read.
and thats right twily, luna destroyed your shit then bailed like a fucking boss.
thats what you get for crushing on that bitch tia.
tyrant with a foot fetish.
man i love this story.
3157297 Tyrant with a foot fetish XD.
Anyways yeah the final chapter will put an end to all questions especially who is Brian Shadow????
3157363
not only does this chapter cement the idea of mine since episode one that flutters has a total fuck me voice but also that i would willingly let luna go all futawesome on me. i dont think i needed to know that last bit but fuck. there it is.
good job Diablo.
3156976 You? My dog? My imaginary cat? My sister? My other sister? Fluttershy? Pinkie Pie? Rarity? Celestia? Twilight? Luna? Cadence? Shining Armor? Applejack? Rainbow Dash? Big Mac? Apple Bloom? Scootaloo? Sweetie Belle? Granny Smith? Twist? Trixie? Snips? Snails? Nightmare Moon? Spike? Pinkamena Diane Pie? Limestone Pie? Marble Pie? Twilight Velvet? Night Light? Fancy Pants? Flim? Flam? Joe? Sombra? Blueblood? Sunset Shimmer? Magnum? Pearl? Sparkler? Dinky? Ditzy (Derpy)? Vinyl Scratch (Dj Pon-3)? Fleur Dis Lee? Lyra? Bon Bon (Sweetie Drops)? Octavia? Colgate (Minuette)? Daring Do? Lightning Strike? Flash Sentry? One of the royal guards? Soarin? Spitfire? Cloud Kicker? The Shadowbolts? Hoops? Rainbow Strike? Score? Snowflake? Sunny Rays? Thuderlane? Braeburn? Caramel? Mr. Cake? Mrs. Cake? Cherilee? Filthy Rich? Hoity Toity? Mayor Mare? Photo Finish? Sapphire Shores? Aunt Orange? Uncle Orange? Cloudy Quartz? Igneous Rock? Stinkin' Rich? Apple Split? Apple Strudel? Apple Rose? Caramel Apple? Golden Delicious? Half Baked Apple? Aloe? Berry Punch? Cherry Berry? Cherry Jubilee? Fiddlesticks? Carrot Top? The Headless Horse? Discord? Dr. Whooves? Lilly Valley? Lotus Blossom? Nurse Reheart? The Olden Pony? Roseluck? Screwball? Harry Trotter (actually does exist)? Screw Loose? Babs Seed? Diamond Tiara? Silver Spoon? Featherweight? Pipsqueak? Pound Cake? Pumpkin Cake? Button Mash? Rumble? Berry Pinch? Princess Erroria?
So, uh, did I get it?
3157389 I will give you a clue one of those answers is right but I want the specific one. If you can't guess with just one answer and you only have two more tries to guess you won't win the big fabulous prize of most certainly NOTHING!
Seriously I am hoping She stands her ground about why she became Candy Clit. and there is understanding.
3157388 So that happened.
Fluttershy does have a fuck me voice, and a flank that won't quit. Why do you think Rainbow Dash hangs around her so much canon as of late?
3157410 So am I and I am writing this
3157401 Ooh, well, at least that narrows it down!
3157422 To about 100
3157426 You forgot Aloe and Vera, but also Brian Shadow... just think about it.
3157428 hmmmmm.... I want this! I've never won anything!
3157453 Well now is your chance... go on and guess two more tries remember.
3157456 Am I allowed to ask questions?
3157462 Yes you are I don't see why not.
3157465 Does Brian narrow it to male, or could it also be a female?
3157469 Brian is an enigma he/she/it could be a male or female the question is does that really help you? Because if it is only males there are still 8 lead male characters in mlp.
I will tell you who it isn't...
Spike
Big Mac
Flash Sentry..
Applebloom
Applejack.
There some clues as to who Brian Shadow isn't
3157474 Nice... looking over my list now. Also, where does your username come from?
3157480 If I tell you I will be a nerd on this site. So pm me that question because I don't want anyone to know it came from World of Warcraft and it was the name of my paladin.
3157491 Nobody will know... DANG they don't have a mysterious face! I know somepony did it at one time or another!
3157498 WHO IS BRIAN SHADOW?
3157518 Do the ShadowBolts count as one, or do I have to name an individual?
3157540 Brian Shadow is one pony ...
3157547 I'm not guessing until I know, and I'm thinking long and hard.
3157558 Long and Hard you say
3157571
3157571 Alright, I present you with my answer... King Sombra. He was not only a shadow in his first appearance, but his mane flows just like the Princess's, his is black like a shadow.
3157702 Eeeehhhhh Wrong... sorry the correct answer is... I shall pm you it XD
Wow awesome chapter i never expected discords um interesting fantasy very well done
3158069 Tomorrow is the final chapter or friday if I can't pull one out by tomorrow.
Just reading through the comments, trying to figure out who this Brian Shadow is, I just figured it out, nice one.
So I just got a PM won't say from who claiming supposedly my followers write my stories... let me make something absolutely clear.
I don't let other ponies/people, write stories for me and then post them as my own. I have not and will not leave anypony non-credited for any ideas, edits, proof read, etc. I have even told some followers to write their own story and one of them has on his own profile and I have not been credited for his work because it's his own.
So if you hear rumors from anypony at all that I didn't write my own stories let me know because one thing about any of my stories whether they suck or rock is they are all my own. Prompts and ideas if I had some inspiration I credit them. Just look at the cover it hasn't changed about my inspiration it's been there in black and white.
3158445 You have? let me know who it is then in pm :P
I figured it out, but don't PM me, I want my guess to be confirmed...
1) This entire thing seems to be rushing rather quickly. :/
2) Flutters seems to be OOC with this whole thing. Interesting 'premise', but its beginning to seem 'wash, rinse, repeat'.
3) The most incorruptible of the 6 is single handedly destroying ponyville from the inside out. This is a very big pill to swallow...
Not gonna lie, this isnt my cup of tea.
3160031
Fluttershy has never been a bitch before? I would suggest you watch the Dragon Quest episode and the Putting your hoof down episode.
I think you will find Fluttershy can be mean if need be or not as kind or timid. Sure she is over all shy but like she said she can't perform in crowds. She isn't in a crowd she is at her house anonymous like during the MMDW episode.
Try again good sir.
As for it not being your cup of tea that's fine this story won't please everyone.
As to it being rushed. I didn't want the staleness to hit as you pointed out with the wash rinse repeat.
The comedy!
3160453 Yeah apparently some people don't see the comedy tag and think "ooh a piece of candy." So when they find out not much sex going on or in depth sex they go ... "where is the beef?"
3160472
I like this mostly for the comedy.