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A textbook documenting the supposed development and rise of ponykind, the creation of pony civilization, and the events that shaped it into Equestria as it is today.

Chapters (5)

The Birth of Ponykind · 19th Aug 2013 · 676 words
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Development of Intelligence · 19th Aug 2013 · 365 words
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Cradle of Civilization · 19th Aug 2013 · 369 words
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Seeds of Evil · 20th Aug 2013 · 382 words
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The Founding of Equestria · 22nd Aug 2013 · 500 words
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Slag

Slag #1 · Aug 19th, 2013 · · · Development of Intelligence ·

This is a bit of an experiment. I also don't know if I should try and tie this in with 'A Brief History of Equestria' or write my own separate ideas on the matter.

Also, apologies to writing so succinctly. I've always been one to either get to the point or unnecessarily embellish things, and I figure the former is superior.

Syron

Syron #2 · Aug 19th, 2013 · · · Development of Intelligence ·

Interesting for sure, keep going! The very short chapters and text book style make it an easy and quick read, great to drive those moments of boredom away, and so far, there are no contradictions that would have caught my eye (though I haven't thought about it too much yet). You've already begun pointing towards the change into herbivores, but I'm still curious how exactly you'll pull it off.