• Published 15th Aug 2013
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Sweetie's Love - SweetieTheBot



Sweetie Belle falls for a stranger at the wrong time, and her emotions make the last days of the school year crazier than expected.

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4 - The Window

Sweetie Belle walked home by herself.

The high of talking to Cosmic had worn off, and now she was trotting home, sad at the fact she'd probably never speak to Cosmic Flash again.

When she got home, she stopped holding back the tears. She cried into her pillow until it was soaked in her salty tears.

If only she'd talked to him earlier.

***

Sweetie Belle didn't come down for dinner.

She lay in her bed, motionless. Much like last night, except this time she wasn't daydreaming about love.

She would normally be glad to be out of the machine that was school, but her the small corner of her mind that was happy, was extinguished by the horrible truth.

Sweetie grew tired, and crawled into her bed.

She put the blankets over her head, and again was rocked by a wave of sobs.

She wanted desperately to go to sleep, and maybe have some good dreams, to make the reality of the world go away.

Eventually, her head became hazey and she was about to nod off, when she awoken by a knock.

Sweetie Belle looked up, and heard the knock again.

She turned to her window, and almost fell out of her bed with surprise at what she saw.

Somepony with a teal mane was knocking at her window.

Author's Note:

I am satisfied with how this ended. This was basically a story from my life, but ponyfied. It's what would have happened, if I'd made the right choices.

Comments ( 13 )

This is such a cute and heart-warming story.
Great job, mate. Keep it up!

I love this! :pinkiehappy: A like for sure.

Adorable. Short and Sweet. Me Gusta.:trollestia:

This was pretty good. I like it :)

Aww this is so sweet :heart:
Great read :twilightsmile:

You say it's from your life...
I love the story, but your author's notes..
What did you do wrong?

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I didn't go up and talk to 'Cosmic Flash'

now I speak to him over the internet, just as friends.

and even if I feel a lot more than I let on,

nothing more can happen.

:fluttershysad:

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Pity.
Well, maybe one day it can change.
And hopefully for you, it will.

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