A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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I loved how they expressed there feelings but why did you have him hurt himself It make me on the edge waiting for the next chapter good show sir
Damn cliffhanger!
You HAD to do it, dont you? I hope that everything goes good in the end...
Why the hell would he kill himself after they just pour their hearts out to him, I hope he makes it and has a good explanation, cause this would be a horrible way to end a story.
I wonder if Shadow had anything to do with Jame's trying to kill himself?
BUCKING HELL I HATE CLIFFHANGERS, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Twilight and Trixie were the only ones that didn't mention that James had sex with them.
wat
I'm gonna really fuck you up James, just wait for it!
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Well,how the hell should James explain since that he is now dead...probably?
I could not make it past twilight before I broke down and skipped to the feels overload self-destruct in NOW
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That was the biggest point of this chapter. It was to make everyone feel.
Jesus man I had to pause at Rainbowdash's part to write this,there was to much emotion in the words you placed that I had to put this down. Good job mate I teared up quite a bit, keep it up I rarely feel those emotions anymore.
3549110 the feels
Sir! There's a ping on the dawwdar. What should we do?
Cry when ready put. Cry when ready......
Sir, yes sir......
Oh fuck fuck fuck.
THE FEEL ARE COMING!
Too much solid writing...Yeah I skipped most of it.
HEY! I know its heartless but I got enough things to cry about at the moment so back off.
This is just like game of thrones, characters get introduced and people love said character, but then you get screwed over and they die
Damn, that last part went from 0 to 100 reeeal fucken fast.
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Dude your character is a hardened SOLDIER not a pansy ass Civie quit it with the sob story shit.